PREMONITION IN THE PARK

JaneAParis
Author: JaneAParis
Word Count: 333
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This is a dream I had over twenty years ago. I have always remembered it because not only was it a premonition about what would happen in my future life, it was also one of the scariest dreams I have ever had.

I was strolling in the park. It was a beautiful sunlit day, the flowers were blooming and the birds were singing in the trees. Everything was super colorful and vibrant. People were everywhere having fun and relaxing. There was lots of noise from kids playing and running, dogs barking, and people talking. Everybody was having a good time. Then all of a sudden all the people and animals disappeared. Everything turned to black and white; there were no more colors at all. Aditionally, all of a sudden everything was desolate and still, it was a very dramatic shift. Then the weather began to storm. The wind was furious and howling. It was raining really hard and there was lightening. Crack, snapped the lightening bolts across the black stormy, rainy skies. I was all alone and scared in the pitch black except for the light coming from the frequent lightening bolts. I was getting soaked with rain. It was almost like a cemetery instead of a park. It was really eerie and spooky. I looked up and in my path there was a giant statue of a man, all in white marble. He had a very stern look on his face and he was pointing a long arm with hand and pointed finger at me. His eyes were dark and ominous in the white marble and he was glaring at me. His glare was petrifying and foreboding…I woke up shivering and shaking, and feeling somehow that I would meet this presence again sometime in the future, and I did. It was a premonition of my future, now past, divorce, and he was my ex-husband. He is still pointing that finger at me.

JANE Á PARIS

Copyright ©2008 JANE Á PARIS

PREMONITION IN THE PARK

I do believe in signs and premontions, and this is one that I had in a dream twenty years ago. I never forgot it. Especially when it came to pass.

PREMONITION IN THE PARK belongs to the following groups:

Art Inspired by Dreams, Back In Black, Bits and Pieces , Bubblettes, Graphic Scratch, Safe Haven, Short stories - Spherical Scriptings, Spiritual Art and WMG
  • DiannaLee

    DiannaLee, 4 months ago

    Wow!!!!....interesting….very interesting. Thanks for sharing this:)

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar, 4 months ago

    It’s utterly awesome sweet Jane! like it

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis in reply to DiannaLee’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thanks Dianna. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis in reply to Ushna Sardar’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thanks Ushna. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Aurora Pintore

    Aurora Pintore, 4 months ago

    Send him away Jane, don’t let him hurt you anymore. (I know it’is not an easy ting to do, but there must be a way).
    I liked your poem very much !!!
    Smiles from Aurora

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis in reply to Aurora Pintore’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thanks Aurora for the very wise advise. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Janine Peterson

    Janine Peterson, 4 months ago

    Break offi that fucking finger and stuff it up his nose…..I just recently talked with a qualified person about a reacurring dream I’ve had and it’s very interesting what are unconcious minds come up with. You have the power to dream this again, only this time leave out all the bad stuff and meet yourself a really nice guy in the park on a beautiful day….........Let that come true in your future….........I send you heaps of love and healing, Jane.

  • bchrisdesigns

    bchrisdesigns, 4 months ago

    Wow…. I had a similar experience with a creepy man in my dreams, only…it turned out differently… I wrote a story about it too, but have never had it published. Yours brought me back there and gave me chills!

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis in reply to Janine Peterson’s comment, 4 months ago

    Sometimes I wish I could. He certainly deserves it:-) Thanks for the sweet words of understanding, love, hope and healing. Smiles from Jane.

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis in reply to bchrisdesigns’s comment, 4 months ago

    Dreams are strange aren’t they, it certainly is fascinating the way our minds work. Thanks for reading and commenting. Smiles from Jane:-)

  • Ria Rosa Quinto

    Ria Rosa Quinto, 4 months ago

    Wow. This sent chills down my spine. Your words paint a very vivid picture…
    Very strange and spooky…

  • JaneAParis

    JaneAParis in reply to Ria Rosa Quinto’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thanks Ria, for your reading, your time and your comments. Yes, it was the worst dream I ever had, I still remember it twenty years later. Smiles from Jane:-)

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