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Deafening Quiet

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale.

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .it’s beginning to sound melodic .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .it’s beginning to sound melodic .I sit and listen as my house’s chorus ,as though alive .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .it’s beginning to sound melodic .I sit and listen as my house’s chorus ,as though alive .but not a soul stirs…….cats and dogs sound asleep , snoring in the corner .

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .it’s beginning to sound melodic .I sit and listen as my house’s chorus ,as though alive .but not a soul stirs…….cats and dogs sound asleep , snoring in the corner .as quiet breathing resumes ………

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .it’s beginning to sound melodic .I sit and listen as my house’s chorus ,as though alive .but not a soul stirs…….cats and dogs sound asleep , snoring in the corner .as quiet breathing resumes ………I listenJane.m 2013

Quiet.. it’s ever so quiet.I can almost hear myself breath.the peaceful silence .enveloping me is suddenly broken.sound of gusting wind errupts .trees arching in the wind , tired of this dry summer heatache .with the burden of their own weight against the gale..groaning branches break as my roof metal joins the chorus .with a rapturous crash….like symbols .it’s beginning to sound melodic .I sit and listen as my house’s chorus ,as though alive .but not a soul stirs…….cats and dogs sound asleep , snoring in the corner .as quiet breathing resumes ………I listenJane.m 2013

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poem written in a storm

I capture images of the world around me. I am fortunate to see native flora and fauna in my garden andnearby.Which features in my portfolio,along with my love of animals , flowers and the beauty of nature I enjoy travel and meeting people

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Comments

  • Malcolm Chant
    Malcolm Chantover 1 year ago

    What a wonderful way with words you have Jainie, this is so beautiful.

  • thank you Malcolm . I was sitting here a t my computer one night and a storm came up so fierce , but dogs and cats never stirred :)
    Jane

    – jainiemac

  • Guendalyn
    Guendalynover 1 year ago

    MAGNIFIC WORDS !

  • thanks Guen :))

    – jainiemac

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 1 year ago

    wow, so love how you did this, made it all seem more dramatic!! awesome writing! xoxoxox

  • thanks Shar , I don’t know what hppened with the formating when I tried to ‘edit’ it it shows up as normal ?
    I’m glad you like it
    Jane xox

    – jainiemac

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 1 year ago

    I wouldn’t call it ‘normal’ but it is difficult to explain. The point is, sometimes when things happen by mistake, which I guess is what you are saying, it is a good thing. Every line you wrote was repeated with the next and then the entire poem was finally written. Crazier things have happened I suppose lol. Is that what you meant or did you do this on purpose?? Either way, it worked!! xoxoxxooxxo

  • Donna19
    Donna19over 1 year ago


    Congratulations, I could see this read on stage:)

  • Donna thank you so much i missed your wonderful feature
    Jane :))

    – jainiemac

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