Pluto's Venus
Venus plays
across a stream
as Pluto sways
in a milkbone dream
“the question was…”
which day is to 55
as night is to us
and which way
combines alive
with the color
of love…
“magical”
absolutely magical…
when the radio
sang and the
waves came in
shining lights
visible
felt in the red
ultra
are the sensual
violet stars
above the stares
a game of dares
for those
“who care”
and to play the
games of magnitude
is to amplify
gratitude
in an exchange
called living
and giving
in the names
of the subtle
beneficial
as peace is growing
planted in plains
before the knowing
ever became
the same
as the explored.
“… fetch…”
Comments
Cool . . .
so are you :) x
– IzzyGumbo
in the bright city lights numbering backwards
co-signs of algebra tumble from pluto`s eyes
venus chased cupid around the stairs to the stars
pluto now a comet lost in space from neptunes gaze
siruis barked and chased the tale dreaming along the milky way
andromeda opened the door to let them in
as 55 days to venus is just 1 to pluto
time and space tell us everything but also nothing
tells us where the ‘ball’ is charlie ;)
– IzzyGumbo
beautiful IzzyGumbo….
thanks Rocky xo
– IzzyGumbo
A great free verse Iz
thank you for your support my friend :)
– IzzyGumbo
excellent piece izzy..
wonderful to see you UB !
– IzzyGumbo
I’m searchng for the right adjectives….ethereal? Abstract? I’m not sure. Really cool though!
thanks, when I wrote this, I was viewing pluto and venus and thinking about the light spectrum … “really cool” works for me. ;)
– IzzyGumbo
beautiful verse
THankyou boo ;)
– IzzyGumbo
woof, woof
:) hey you. thanks for reading.
– IzzyGumbo
Izzy, this is outstanding…big smiles…=)XO
thank you so much Lisa!! xo
– IzzyGumbo
so wonderful:)
hugs Robin, thank you dear heart. :) x
– IzzyGumbo