Consume Me

IntriCate
Author: IntriCate
Word Count: 58
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I take you into me
and realize it is I
that wants to be consumed by you.

Obliterate all that stands for me
create me
right from the beginning.

My beginning becomes
your end just as
knowing you
rebirths me.

Let your passion destroy
for the heat of your fire
is better than the tepidness

of your nonchalance.

  • Leon Walker

    Leon Walker

    I think I have a very clear understanding of this piece of writing. Unfortunately it is a place where many of us wander through. You captured it perfectly!!!

  • IntriCate replied

    Thank you Leon as always for your insightful comments!

  • valentina63

    valentina63

    I love this …....for the heat of your fire/is better than the tepidness/of your nonchalance….........
    sooo true and so beautifully written.!!

  • IntriCate replied

    Thank you valentina. I look forward to reading your writing!

  • Matt Roberts

    Matt Roberts

    Good :)

  • IntriCate replied

    Thanks! : )

  • wigs

    wigs

    love this…nice writing

  • IntriCate replied

    Thank you kindly, wigs.

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Is that far from….
    is that close..
    the who,
    the one….in playing love.
    Rosa (great communication…the lover felt but unseen)

  • IntriCate replied

    Yes, much left to interpretation, physical or emotional love and being caught up… Cheers Rosa!

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio 11 days ago

    AH! TOTAL ABANDON!! BELLISSIMO!

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