Lust

Peter Davidson
Author: Peter Davidson
Word Count: 60
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Lust

Pressed against the sea wall, she pulls him closer, eyes shut and fingers grasping at his hair. Her skirt rides higher and a flash of skin as pale as a lost memory transfixes me. Sitting in my deckchair, joints aching, the sun drying my skin, I drag my gaze away and stare at the horizon, trying to remember that feeling.

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery

    You’ve captured the title perfectly, even though overall the story seems a bittersweet one.

  • Peter Davidson replied

    Yes, bitter-sweet was indeed the point. Thanks for reading and commenting!

  • Hilary Robertshaw

    Hilary Robertshaw

    Gosh this tugs the heartstrings. Beautifully written Peter.

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age, desire, lust, sex and youth