Soul Shattered
Another late night adventure into poetry, a bit more obscure and obtuse this time, or so I tell myself.
As a companion artwork
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Jodie Noonan’s - Shattered
Soul Shattered
Mind aches, body devours
my last scrap of … energy.
A husk drained of life, torn
between
then torn again,rent and broken
in a bloody pile of mess and bones.
Numb, naked, nothing,
nothing left Not now,
probably never again.
Alone and still.
Soul shattered, splintered
smashed in smithereens.
A pale reflection of,
my distorted dreams.
Never waking, never sleeping,
stateless, in another plane.
Unbecoming, never ending,
once beginning now insane.
bodymechanic
great piece craig! u can have sum dark moments there,and from the writing i take it uve been looking in2 my window again!!..... good stuf !
Heather Loster
wow, powerful words. fab job.
mlgkats
well written
Christina Martin
powerful stuff
John De Bord P...
This is fantastic!
Cadence Gamache
Woah. Very raw and emotional… I love the last two stanzas the best – Great flow :)
ChainmailChick
Beautifully dark.
Jessica Tremp
i love ‘stateless, in another plane…’ i get that feeling completely…
Amanda Cole
powerful craig!
Jenny Haskey
Powerful words indeed Craig – wonderful work as ever! Means the world to me right now as we head into the festive season & my insomnia grows worse, soul shattered sums things up perfectly!!!
Karen Cougan
wow Craig that speaks volumes…....xkc
giovanniart
I’m sure we must have passed through the same doorway, but i’m also sure it’s to allow us to see, hear, speak, paint, photograph or write what we would not, had we not ventured there
susan davies
great words
tambatoys
very good indeed craig!
MissKristy
Brilliant collab! The words fit that image perfectly. Nicely done, Craig!
Leon Walker
What a wonderful written piece and the image is great!!!
Joseph Gunderson
awesome this is very good you can write
myoriginalsin
I love the lines:
“Numb, naked, nothing,
nothing left Not now,
probably never again.
Alone and still”
I’ve been there. Such powerful words…