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IF (a poem)

IF
Rain
September 08th 2005

If I were you and you were me
Would we be the same us that others see?

If eagles were buzzards and buzzards were eagles
Would the eagle disgust, while the buzzard soared high?

If You were the cover and I was the book
Would you know what was written on it’s pages?

If the sun were rain and rain was the sun
Would we then jump in great big sun-puddles?

And if I was your heart and you were my eyes
Would you cry every time it’s been broken?

This may seem like jumbled up nonsense to you
But would it be that odd? Could it be so strange?
If you thought with your soul and drifted on dreams
And wisdom came in a cereal box?!?

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A poem full of questions to ponder….and maybe make you smile

Comments

  • RanyLutz
    RanyLutzover 7 years ago

    Very Nice!!!!!!!!!! My main concern thought, Infinity, Is if I were you, would I like me???
    Did I get that right?? LOL!!!!!!!

  • InfinityRain
    InfinityRainover 7 years ago

    hehe Another very good question Rany, and would you like yourself? :P

  • RanyLutz
    RanyLutzover 7 years ago

    Thats what I am asking Infinity. If I were you, then you would be me, so I would definitely like you but maybe not myself!!!!! I think maybe I messed it up again……………….

  • InfinityRain
    InfinityRainover 7 years ago

    Nahh I understand what you mean :) hugs to you Rany and if you were me and I were you, then ……well of course cuz you like everybody :)

  • RanyLutz
    RanyLutzover 7 years ago

    Well…………….you may have understood……………maybe not………………….Great poem though, I think we all need to do a little of “If in your shoes” perspective from time to time.

    Cheers, Rany

  • lareejc
    lareejcover 7 years ago

    Rany – if I were you and you were me..I wouldn’t be working today and I would like me! Coarse, if I were you and you were me – I’d like you too because of you would be working so all the beer drinkers could indulge! did that make sense??

  • lareejc
    lareejcover 7 years ago

    what a darling poem! I think that would make a perfect poem to – have everyone add to; know what I mean?

  • lareejc
    lareejcover 7 years ago

    what a darling poem! I think that would make a perfect poem to – have everyone add to; know what I mean?

  • Karen Cougan
    Karen Couganover 7 years ago

    LOL, lovely mate
    xkc

  • Paul Louis Villani
    Paul Louis Vil...over 7 years ago

    The joyous overtones in this piece are addictive!
    Lovely work Rain! :D

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