My Tears Are Your Rain
Written during a rain storm in which I imagined that the rain was a sad woman weeping for the one she left behind.
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I know your nights are lonely and cold
And I know your days are gray,
The once brilliant promise of sun
Has turned to a downpour of dark rain.
May the laws of nature be suspended
That you may feel me near
And even though you cannot see me
I share your pain, I feel your fear.
Though you feel the crimson kiss of sorrow
And your tears are all you know,
Pause for a moment and know that on your darkest days
My tears stain your windows.
David Haviland
this is gorgeous, truly brilliant writing
blueclover
lovely poem…. :)
Bessie Ho
Beautifully composed! “My tears stain your windows” made my heart sink and it takes it back to the title “My tears are your rain”, brilliant!
sweetmiseryxx
I thought the last line was brilliant
its haunting in its own way but its wonderful
I like it a lot.
xo
Suzanne German
indigo…so so tender
Elenne Boothe
WONDERFUL. SAYING. LOVE IT
Aloramyst
Absolutely beautiful poem!
ienemien
Beatiful!!!! I have the feeling that you give an answer… I made a poem Love and Tears… I hope you read it… warm greetings and a kis from me…ien
Adrian Kent
Sensational writing! Goose bumps!!
csutika
absolutely brilliant thank you sharing with me