Starkly by Daylight

starkly she is torn brightly
ripping at the shreds of her allure
exposing her flesh to the gaze
her femininity bleeds naked
dripping sensuality puddles
upon the coolness of the floor

october 2011 indigo-song ©

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A write inspired by a deeply soulful image by Trish.

I write……when there are no words to be spoken.

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  • Edibl3leper
    Edibl3leperover 3 years ago

    The name is innovative, artistically witty and refreshing like the rest of the poem. I really enjoyed this, enough to favorite it. (-:

  • omg..thank you so much for your wonderful comment Leper…:)

    – indigo-song

  • Edibl3leper
    Edibl3leperover 3 years ago

  • Fabulous!!….your support of my work is very much appreciated….:) Ta lol

    – indigo-song

  • charliethetramp
    charliethetrampover 1 year ago

    seems to have a stark poignancy at the moment
    peeling away the layers has a revealing quality

  • I thought so too…I wrote this a while ago for an image by Trish Mita…as so much writing does…we transfer from the page into our lives to find new relevance.

    – indigo-song

  • MINDSET
    MINDSETabout 1 year ago

    Nicely written…………..

  • Very much appreciated, thank you..

    – indigo-song

  • Donna19
    Donna1910 months ago


    Congratulations! To say this is passionate would be understating the power in your words. Just wow!

  • Trish produced 3 fabulous images that just struck a chord with me…one inspired this piece…:))))

    – indigo-song

  • Arco Iris  R
    Arco Iris R7 months ago

    I totally agree with Edib. Had to read three times to peel away the layers. Each one had a different quality yet came out to its bare essence. Your tittle is witty, yet the poem made my brain work. Would have loved to see the images. Great one

  • Thank you Iris….Trish and I were working on a calender and managed three pieces before life got in the way…I love all three of them….but then I am biased :-) x

    – indigo-song


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