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Black Rock Cave

One day a man was going to camp in a cave. in death vally. He set up his sleeping bag. Then it started to rian, and then lightning struck in front of the cave, and made a rock to heavy to move fall in front of the cave. It was pitch black except for his fire. Then there was an earthquack and rocks came of and he saw flesh and blood in the rocks from other campers. and there was something carved in the rock that said leave – or this will be you. And than he looked and had to addmit it was him. Unfortuonatly he didn’t scare easly so he decided to investagate. Then all of a sudden – he turned around and discovered he discovered the tunnel of time! He was going back in time! Then he couldn’t go any further he was in the begining of time, to die, die in this hot earth.

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A story about time travel written at the age of 11. Originally posted at indeterminacy.blogspot.com

URL: http://indeterminacy.blogspot.com/2006/08/black...

Comments

  • Cathie Tranent
    Cathie Tranentalmost 7 years ago

    Wow! Looks like you’ve had the odd story in you for quite some time!

  • indeterminacy
    indeterminacyalmost 7 years ago

    This just got rejected from the “Art and Stories Made For Children” – but I guess it makes sense as this was written by a child (I finally posted it in the by children group). But I wonder if they thought a story written by a child was not suitable for children?

  • Heavenandus777
    Heavenandus777almost 6 years ago

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