Dénouement
Like air from your lungs
Your breath streamed out in a river
A multitude
A torrent
A flood of words we couldn’t speak
Like air from your lungs
Your breath streamed out in a river
A multitude
A torrent
A flood of words we couldn’t speak
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I have no idea what the title means…. Probably cos I didn’t finish high school. But the writing is great… I think i’ve felt this before! Nice one Imogene.
Thanks Krisso
a denouement is a French term meaning “unraveling” or “unknotting”, mainly used in literature for the winding down of a story after (or with) the climax XD
oh look, english has taught me something
– Imogene Munday
t’s lovely. i like small bits of writing like this, i do it sometimes in my head. nice use of the lovely language that is english (and i like this french word of yours).
xx
s-a
yeah, me too :) i hardly ever write them down but i quite like this one XD
– Imogene Munday
And now it has taught me something! Thanks Imogene!
this is so subtle and beautiful.
ahh big word! … very impressive immy XD
lovely,comes from the heart :)
This is so deep in such a short amount of words you’ve created something incredibly beautiful!
a flood of thoughts unspoken
a chord of silence broken
torrential fears awoken
am i lost or found?
i can only hope not to fall asleep.
DAY DREAMING
maybe “torrential fears in me awoken” makes the thing sound better. you tell me.
or “torrential fears are woken”
sorry for filling up your page;)
keep writing!