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Like air from your lungsYour breath streamed out in a riverA multitudeA torrent
A flood of words we couldn’t speak
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I have no idea what the title means…. Probably cos I didn’t finish high school. But the writing is great… I think i’ve felt this before! Nice one Imogene.
Thanks Krissoa denouement is a French term meaning “unraveling” or “unknotting”, mainly used in literature for the winding down of a story after (or with) the climax XDoh look, english has taught me something
– Imogene Munday
t’s lovely. i like small bits of writing like this, i do it sometimes in my head. nice use of the lovely language that is english (and i like this french word of yours).
yeah, me too :) i hardly ever write them down but i quite like this one XD
And now it has taught me something! Thanks Imogene!
this is so subtle and beautiful.
ahh big word! … very impressive immy XD
lovely,comes from the heart :)
This is so deep in such a short amount of words you’ve created something incredibly beautiful!
a flood of thoughts unspokena chord of silence brokentorrential fears awokenam i lost or found?i can only hope not to fall asleep.
maybe “torrential fears in me awoken” makes the thing sound better. you tell me.
or “torrential fears are woken”
sorry for filling up your page;)