Luminescent droplets
Of crystal white
Sat on her head
Like raindrops
After a drizzle

The trees surrounding her
Shone turquoise blue
As an aura
Inviting you to
Go forward

Tendrils of grey mist
Swirled around her ankles
Imposing, a great
And terrible beauty

Britta Pung

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My 13 year old daughter’s poem.


mist, beauty, head, droplets, aura, inviting


  • S .
    S .about 4 years ago

    very cool ! wow
    looks like we have a poetess in the making
    tell her i said this was fantastic :)

  • Thanks Shoaib! She is incredibly talented, Im really proud of her.

    – Imber

  • 8upchef
    8upchefabout 4 years ago

    Bravo! Hope to see more!

  • You will, that’s for sure. Many thanks :)!

    – Imber

  • shadyuk
    shadyukabout 4 years ago

    Wonderful !

  • Thank you so much :)

    – Imber

  • Paulo Nuno
    Paulo Nunoabout 4 years ago

    very,very good !

  • Many, many thanks :)

    – Imber

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooabout 4 years ago

    wonderful poetry

  • Keith Reesor
    Keith Reesorabout 4 years ago

    Lovely writing!! :)

  • Mary Campbell
    Mary Campbellalmost 3 years ago

    Wow, she touches it and so young..

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