Beauty
Luminescent droplets
Of crystal white
Sat on her head
Like raindrops
After a drizzle
The trees surrounding her
Shone turquoise blue
As an aura
Inviting you to
Go forward
Tendrils of grey mist
Swirled around her ankles
Mysterious
Imposing, a great
And terrible beauty
Britta Pung
Comments
very cool ! wow
looks like we have a poetess in the making
tell her i said this was fantastic :)
Thanks Shoaib! She is incredibly talented, Im really proud of her.
– Imber
Bravo! Hope to see more!
You will, that’s for sure. Many thanks :)!
– Imber
Wonderful !
Thank you so much :)
– Imber
very,very good !
Many, many thanks :)
– Imber
wonderful poetry
Lovely writing!! :)
Wow, she touches it and so young..