What...
What is pain if im not going through it right now…
what is heartbreak if i dont feel it everytime i see you…
What is forever if it only had a meaning when we were together…
what is LIFE without you in it?
Theres still that song you used to sing…
theres still the tears that fell when you held me and whispered it…
theres no more happiness…
all i hear is that same damn melody playing over and over…
why’d you have to leave?
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Awww…you`ll get over it ;)
WOW… tnx for trying to make me feel better… LOL
it just happened yesturday
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Because you wrote this at the time of going through your crisis, you were able to succinctly capture the emotion in words. They’re not contrived at all and they’re wonderful. We all write best when we are experiencing the moment. You did a wonderful job with this. I’m so sorry for your loss.
tnx… u got it! most people dont understand… no not all poetry is written best from heartache… but to me the BEST poetry comes from pain… as in RIGHT NOW… u cant go through something a week ago and then write about it and act like your still going through the pain… it just doesnt work that way
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i hear ya…i only write if i`m well up or down…the rest is well…crappy ;)
quite often i get choked up if i read my own stuff coz i remember how i felt when i originally wrote it
(the sad stuff)
lol. yeah i know exactly how u feel…
or sometimes i can be smiling, and then i’ll start writing and all of a sudden tears will fall, and i cant control them…
its funny how poetry effects ur life…
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you know how to stir emotion thats very good my righting is just hatefull