What...

What is pain if im not going through it right now…
what is heartbreak if i dont feel it everytime i see you…
What is forever if it only had a meaning when we were together…
what is LIFE without you in it?

Theres still that song you used to sing…
theres still the tears that fell when you held me and whispered it…
theres no more happiness…
all i hear is that same damn melody playing over and over…
why’d you have to leave?


i ♥ u... do u ♥ me too?

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sorry its so short i’ll finish it later when im not crying

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  • LostBoy1
    LostBoy1about 4 years ago

    Awww…you`ll get over it ;)

  • WOW… tnx for trying to make me feel better… LOL
    it just happened yesturday

    – i ♥ u... do u ♥ me too?

  • GenuineSuede
    GenuineSuedeabout 4 years ago

    Because you wrote this at the time of going through your crisis, you were able to succinctly capture the emotion in words. They’re not contrived at all and they’re wonderful. We all write best when we are experiencing the moment. You did a wonderful job with this. I’m so sorry for your loss.

  • tnx… u got it! most people dont understand… no not all poetry is written best from heartache… but to me the BEST poetry comes from pain… as in RIGHT NOW… u cant go through something a week ago and then write about it and act like your still going through the pain… it just doesnt work that way

    – i ♥ u... do u ♥ me too?

  • LostBoy1
    LostBoy1about 4 years ago

    i hear ya…i only write if i`m well up or down…the rest is well…crappy ;)

    quite often i get choked up if i read my own stuff coz i remember how i felt when i originally wrote it
    (the sad stuff)

  • lol. yeah i know exactly how u feel…
    or sometimes i can be smiling, and then i’ll start writing and all of a sudden tears will fall, and i cant control them…
    its funny how poetry effects ur life…

    – i ♥ u... do u ♥ me too?

  • joshua jacobson
    joshua jacobsonover 2 years ago

    you know how to stir emotion thats very good my righting is just hatefull