canvas made unwhite
uncovered this thursday night into the friday morning of september 12th, anno domini 2008
Ah, the poem…
so dangerous,
like a song
of love
played with the
knife on the inner
walls of the heart…
bleeding colours
from red to pink
onto the
canvas of the
soul… too
blue to touch
paint me with a
tender tongue,
make me into a
song of unspoken
desires and
retouch my
light with a
dash of
sadness
be
more
so
forever
reflector
An amazing piece of writing – masterful !
Amber Elizabet...
Awe Inspiring my dear friend what a write beautiful w super hug lil me xx
jennyfnf
You must have watched the fractal image I posted today form under a spell. This is so weird. A wonderful touching story that matches my feelings exaclty.
Reiana
moving words – so beautifully allegorized with colour
Anthea Slade
This is an exquisite poem Vasile both inspired and inspirational…I love the flow , rhythm and the colours evoking and symbolising emotion…this is more than a poem…it is a love song in red, pink and blue. I am deeply moved by your beautiful words that reflect your beautiful imagination.
Anthony R. Pla...
Lovely poem! And I’m really liking how the verses look like half of a person, from head to toe, the curves of the ends of the lines are in concert with the verse!! Excellent effect!
ufosIsee
Written with excellence again..
RosaCobos
So the blue will be rotten
by the warmth
and congealed grass…..
become watery and dead…
except the rottings,
white as snow…
resisting the indiference…..
of the dominant sun.
Rosa (I love it so much..!Vasile…..so god to hear your heart in my “Unwinged Little Angel”
thank you)
kimangeline
so sensual..i love it
cathrinedp
magical. Your words flow like music.
Erika .
Brilliant. This is perfect.
Shoaib .
Ah, the poem…
so dangerous,
wow very awesome
so true
JDNarts
Well thought and well wraught; beautiful flow and imagery. Well done!