three months
and still lingers
the feeling
of a thought
eye thought
of you
thought
just playing with words
that might mean something
to somebody
or nothing
to everybody
I wish I know
who’s who
three months
and still lingers
the feeling
of a thought
eye thought
of you
just playing with words
that might mean something
to somebody
or nothing
to everybody
I wish I know
who’s who
Sorina Williams, 3 months ago
Hi Vasile, I find it beautiful – like a memory that over time lost opacity (hope that makes sense) :)
Estelle O'Brien, 3 months ago
I like this Vasile…just playing with words sometimes produces genius! Everything you write affects each reader differently, depending on what’s going on in their life/head at that moment. This poem has a whimsical haunting cadence to it that speaks to me of regret, longing and memories.
reflector, 3 months ago
Very simple but well written with a profound element attached to it. That side text is humorous too my RB mate !
RLHall, 3 months ago
Lovely words, full of possibilities and regrets, magically sad, but not depressing, contented thoughts of things lost…acceptance of what is…
butchart, 3 months ago
a beautiful reflection of feelings V…... almost like reading you thoughts….... without the benefit of seeing them written…........b
Caroline Gorka, 3 months ago
I see..
Beautiful simple writing..
Write more – or less , but more :)
eXposure, 3 months ago
Words of wisdom from Within
to not
Write more would be a Sin ;>)
LoveMy7Cs, 3 months ago
Such beautiful powerful sentiment.
Maxhamish, 3 months ago
I have no idea what it means but I enjoyed reading it…...I’ll confess I struggle with writings sometimes. Cheers
shaz, 3 months ago
In a word….. brilliant.. short but so meaningful
brenwebb, 3 months ago
Vasile….... You should write more without missing any steps in the visual art dept. Please???
JOSEPH VALCOUR..., 3 months ago
BE.
Michael Bernard, 2 months ago
Very nice and the words drip with the message – well done Vasile.
Maya -, 2 months ago
Most interesting poem. The more I read it the more it resonated with me. Thanks for sharing.
Hala E, 17 days ago
so simple…...but absolutely full of meaning with a thousand more words all around – I truly identify with these words …. x