thought

iCandor
Author: iCandor
Word Count: 14
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three months
and still lingers
the feeling
of a thought

eye thought
of you

thought

just playing with words
that might mean something
to somebody
or nothing
to everybody
I wish I know
who’s who

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Beginner's Expressions
  • Sorina Williams

    Sorina Williams, 3 months ago

    Hi Vasile, I find it beautiful – like a memory that over time lost opacity (hope that makes sense) :)

  • Estelle O'Brien

    Estelle O'Brien, 3 months ago

    I like this Vasile…just playing with words sometimes produces genius! Everything you write affects each reader differently, depending on what’s going on in their life/head at that moment. This poem has a whimsical haunting cadence to it that speaks to me of regret, longing and memories.

  • reflector

    reflector, 3 months ago

    Very simple but well written with a profound element attached to it. That side text is humorous too my RB mate !

  • RLHall

    RLHall, 3 months ago

    Lovely words, full of possibilities and regrets, magically sad, but not depressing, contented thoughts of things lost…acceptance of what is…

  • butchart

    butchart, 3 months ago

    a beautiful reflection of feelings V…... almost like reading you thoughts….... without the benefit of seeing them written…........b

  • Caroline Gorka

    Caroline Gorka, 3 months ago

    I see..

    Beautiful simple writing..

    Write more – or less , but more :)

  • eXposure

    eXposure, 3 months ago

    Words of wisdom from Within

    to not
    Write more would be a Sin ;>)

  • LoveMy7Cs

    LoveMy7Cs, 3 months ago

    Such beautiful powerful sentiment.

  • Maxhamish

    Maxhamish, 3 months ago

    I have no idea what it means but I enjoyed reading it…...I’ll confess I struggle with writings sometimes. Cheers

  • shaz

    shaz, 3 months ago

    In a word….. brilliant.. short but so meaningful

  • brenwebb

    brenwebb, 3 months ago

    Vasile….... You should write more without missing any steps in the visual art dept. Please???

  • JOSEPH VALCOURT/ MODERNUS PHOTOGRAPHIC ARTWORK

    JOSEPH VALCOUR..., 3 months ago

    BE.

  • Michael Bernard

    Michael Bernard, 2 months ago

    Very nice and the words drip with the message – well done Vasile.

  • Maya -

    Maya -, 2 months ago

    Most interesting poem. The more I read it the more it resonated with me. Thanks for sharing.

  • Hala E

    Hala E, 17 days ago

    so simple…...but absolutely full of meaning with a thousand more words all around – I truly identify with these words …. x

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