zip code error

addressed to you
the 12th letter of the alphabet

a new fork i found
broke the back of going out of its way

whilst a lick off the old wooden spoon
exploded in the microwave

palm trees swaying in the breeze
of a lazy boy

forgotten silver born into
the lift of wild mountain thyme

knives opening up to a
backwater, spoken of in passing

but drunken bouy, floating Ono
plastic with your church filled eyes

cut and pasted from
a faint edition of Otago Daily Times

facing Ali, inside Job
wisen up and wind down the window

“middlemarch” is calling you to side
with UFOs and/or Geoffery Chaucer

Elijah Wood riding chariots of fir
Lincoln County Road has gone bush

a tug of a plug is bound to cause a stir
coinciding with the screen door being slamed

the pain killer’s jubilation meshed
by knockers of the flow

so, beat me to the second pond
with an aging Apple, tucked away

my fly is open, oppressed against
the Orange County fair

oh dear, i think i just ran out of RAM…

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Comments

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboover 3 years ago

    my dear mary has
    just one small lamb
    in the middle marches
    a green apple man
    and his fly is open
    he makes a mint
    and clover jam ;)

  • read it now izz:) x

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • Jascie Epinn
    Jascie Epinnover 3 years ago

    Wow this is really good. Especially the last line. I got an idea of the meaning but I’m almost entirely sure I’m wrong. You must let me know what it means!

  • what’s your idea?

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • read it now. whats your ideas on this one?

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboover 3 years ago

    radio
    active
    material
    you’re writing is always a wonderful mystery. x

  • mmmmmmmmmmmmm

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboover 3 years ago

    your
    you r
    typos

  • typos
    posty
    post
    stop?

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboabout 3 years ago

    oh no…
    “dont stop” ;)

  • st op
    st operation
    saint operation
    santa operation
    satan operation

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • so would you like to be the surgeon?

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboabout 3 years ago

    “Ali” the papa whispers
    a pellucid pond
    a crystal bond
    a bell in a ball
    … can only be one
    fair is
    what’s calm

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboabout 3 years ago

    and ps….
    only wicked women
    beat their kids
    with wooden spoons
    I found one once
    and cursed the soul
    out of her

  • noone is beating anyone with a wooden spoon

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboabout 3 years ago

    would you like
    the zipcode? ;)

  • approximately;)

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • lolowe
    loloweabout 3 years ago

    This is good Mr. Jam ;)

  • glad you liked it:)

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

  • MoonlightLover
    MoonlightLoverabout 3 years ago

    Haha! Tell me when to laugh Mr Screw. : P

  • laugh when you think you shouldn’t or when you don’t think but find yourself laughing just keep on laughing :) xo

    – Lore and Oida (The Plume)

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