An expert in illness,
Attracted to death,
Sympathy they’re seeking.
Sympathy they get.
A tragedy will happen, they’ll make it last,
For the pity they’re seeking requires the past.
Their actions have reasons, it’s not their fault.
It comes from years ago by some sick adult,
The kids all teased me, my dad gave the strap,
The scout master touched me, my mum spoke like crap.
We’ve all had our problems some worse than others.
But don’t take it out on us, your sisters, your brothers.
I don’t ask you to forget or even forgive.
Just to move on, enjoy life and live.
MWD
Victim
I dont often write, but sometimes I feel compelled, my grammar is not the best (feel free to correct me) Its not one of my strong points, knowing where to put comma’s or full stops. hope you enjoy.
Bevsimages, 3 months ago
Lovely emotion comes through here, very well written & reads well x ;) Bev x
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HotWetSandMob, 3 months ago
Thanks Bev, I m glad you like it. I think your the first to read it. It means alot, thanks
Miri, 2 months ago
Hey – that’s really good, powerful feelings come through, very sad really. Good last line :-)
only spotted one thing ‘They’re actions have reasons…’ think it should be ‘Their actions…’
HotWetSandMob, 2 months ago
Thanks Miri, greatly appreciated. Thanks for the correction, I ll go in and change it. Cheers