Lost to Rebellion
Lost to Rebellion belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion and On YouthIntoxication.
It flows through her sizzling brain.
The mind, the soul that used to overdose
On candy
Happiness
Best Friendship
now chugs the bottle down.
Her eyes are as bloodred as her heart
misleading her conscience.
“Just want to have fun,” she says.
“Just when I’m sad, I promise.”
But the chilly nights come when we fight,
And out into the
prowling streets she’ll go
Her throat
mind
body
quenching.
They pass those sticks to her and she
I n h a l e s,
giggles.
“It’s really not that bad,” she says.
“Just one more time, I promise.”
But the high she feels off this demonic
Piece of paper
rolled into a death sentence
is something she cannot
Resist.
Her brain cells pop
P o p.
Her body weakens
d r a g s.
“We have different opinions; I’ll be safe,” she says.
“It’s only ‘til next year, I promise.”
Promise.
And so I wait.
Trenchtownrock
Wow…This is some write..I absolutely love how you dug deep and produce this art..very strong…great work…a fave.
HopePeace110 replied
Thank you so, so much. x
kashmirecho
Brilliant write. I think many people are “waiting” too. :)
HopePeace110 replied
I agree with you completely. & Thank you very much xx
Shoaib .
awesome…. .lovely write hun !
HopePeace110 replied
Thanks a lot, Shoaib xx
George Coombs
deeply though out and sensitively focused, excellent work
HopePeace110 replied
I appreciate it George, thank you xx