December 7th 1992
A poem not so much about love but about life.
Peering through with squinted sight into a
locked shut eye.
Do not Listen to the burden of a withered mouth
It will only lap you up with
it’s dry white filmy tounge.
The following
day you will
feel ok.
pinkyjain
Wow, this is wonderful Kimberly, so full of a deep meaning, i don’t know what you were going through when you wrote this, but i guess with poetry it can mean different things, to the writer & to the reader as well, to me i need to look into my inner self & listen to my heart & not to what others are telling me to do, or how i should be doing, but follow my own heart & be free
Hoffard
You are on the nail! It has a lot to do with being swallowed up by the world and remembering to swim. Thanks pinkyjain.. xoxoxo
whisperingruth
Wonderful deep expression Kimberly . . . this date must be of great signficance for you . . .thank you for sharing . . .
Hoffard
A date where I woke and started seeing things straight… Thanks whisperingruth! xoxoxo
Trace Lowe
excellet writing full of meaning. Powerful
Hoffard
Thanks Trace.. so sweet of you to say that! I am very shy about my writing!
Laurie McClave
How beautiful and feeling this is Kimberly, Thank you.
Hoffard
Your welcome Laurie.. Glad you like it! xoxoxo
Renate Dartois
This is amazing-wonderful little poem Kimberly.
Hoffard
Thanks Renate Dartois… Means a lot! xoxoxo
thrumyeyes
very nice
ozjami
Pleasantly surprised…Awesome writing K,know exactly what you mean !!
richard9
With so few words…you have said so much. Wonderful! :)
Hoffard replied
Thanks richard… xoxo