The Devil

H M Bascom
Author: H M Bascom
Word Count: 113
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The Devil

You can’t keep a good devil down

Meter 7/5/11

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The Devil belongs to the following groups:

Core [C.O.R.E], THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming Writers

The Devil’s in the details
underneath my bed
Lurking, lurching, licking, lapping at my head

The Devil’s in the cupboard
in my coffee cup
Sneaking, slinking, slipping, sucking it all up

The Devil’s in the closet
behind hanging coats
Telling, tripping, talking, taking mental notes

The Devil’s in the writing
reading between lines
Hoping, hating, helping, hoisting up the signs

The Devil’s in the bubble
holding a sharp pin
Poking, pinching, popping, prodding me to sin

The Devil’s in the laundry
airing dirty clothes
Washing, wasting, wilting, waiting in my prose

The Devil’s in the details
he can’t hide from me
Calling, casting, catching creativity

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    My goodness, Helen, this is great. I love it. I love especially “The Devil’s in the bubble
    holding a sharp pin
    Poking, pinching, popping, prodding me to sin

    Iris

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thanks Iris. Watch out for those Devils! :-)

  • navybrat

    navybrat

    OMG!
    this is just sinfully delicious writing!

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you very much! It was fun to write.

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    No he is in Canberra !!!

    enjoyed that. good one Helen

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thanks Gregory. It was fun to create.

  • Julie Langford

    Julie Langfordcommunity host

    Really well written Helen.

    Ignore the devil – there be angels in your midst :)

  • H M Bascom replied

    Ah but that Devil keeps me on my toes. :-)

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    OMGOSH this is GREAT! Ha!!

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you very much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Absolutely Amazing…that devil just can’t stay away!!!!!!!! xoxoxo

  • H M Bascom replied

    Drawn to me it seems. xoxo

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    Sure will. Iris

  • Julie Langford

    Julie Langfordcommunity host

    Ah but that Devil keeps me on my toes. :-)

    True. Without evel devils, the angels couldn’t shine eh!

  • lianne

    lianne

    Incredibly clever and phenomenal writing Helen – I’ve always loved that expression for some strange reason, but I’ve never seen it put to better use! Positively brilliant!

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you very much! I’ve always liked that phrase too. Don’t get too caught up in the details or the Devil will get ya! :-)

  • Michael Degenhardt

    Michael Degenh...

    The read to this has a steady beat and your words xoffer a wonderful clarity of thought. A wonderful write. Michael

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you very much Michael.

  • [l1|\|70|\| 7\|r33 KMA

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    Fantastic!

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thanks friend!

  • Jack Grace

    Jack Grace

    If he’s washing the laundry how bad can he be, wait, whats that in the wash water? Love this Helen.

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you Jack!

  • funkyfacestudio

    funkyfacestudio

    oooh damn that’s good !

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you!

  • theyellowfury

    theyellowfury

    He’s fkn everywhere alright. Well spotted, duly noted. Great read.

  • H M Bascom replied

    Now you know where to find him/her. :-)

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    you seem to be having a devil of a time.. ;0) ..... The devil never gets tired of being everywhere far too often ….Must be one way ticket we can offer him? Me thinks you may even outsmart him…XX

  • H M Bascom replied

    I’m doing my best Arcadia. :-)

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    Fabulous poem Helen, nothing like a bit of devilish inspiration :)

    I wonder if it’s ok to say, “fuck you devil” to the dirty rat? ;
    )

  • H M Bascom replied

    Unless he/she is a member of the Please Play Nice club, I’m sure it’s ok.

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    THE DEVIL HAS BAD PR!! IF GOD CREATED EVERYTHING…...THE OLD CIRCULAR ARGUMENT!! ...STICK IT TO THE FUCKING REAL DEVILS HELEN!! BRAVO!! X

  • H M Bascom replied

    The Devil does catch it bad, eh? ;-)

  • Marion  Cullen

    Marion Cullen

    The Devil’s in the bubble
    holding a sharp pin
    Poking, pinching, popping, prodding me to sin

    You nailed it for me with this line….to be sure, the devil will take all the credit.it can get.;)

  • H M Bascom replied

    And the Devil has been on a winning streak.

  • Kitty Schul

    Kitty Schul

    Nice =]

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you daughter!

  • Susan Bergstrom

    Susan Bergstrom

    I agree with Navy Brat….I Love This!!!!!!

  • H M Bascom replied

    Glad you like it Susan!

  • Jane17

    Jane17

    great rhythm !

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you very much!

  • theyellowfury
  • H M Bascom replied

    e a b e a b a e a b e a HAHAHAHA

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    this is bloody fantastic…...I LOVE it!!!!
    and on a more serious note…
    this is awesome Helen and I love it!

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you very much sweet Wendy! You are a fantastic friend!

  • JenniferB

    JenniferB

    everyone needs a little devil in them some time to stoke up the fire… Brilliant writing. :)

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thank you Jennifer. I agree completely. :-)

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    When I read the title of your poem, I thought the next line might be….

    ”...made me do it!”
    LOL

  • H M Bascom replied

    heehee No, I own my own actions. They Devil has a hard time keeping up with me sometimes. ;-)

  • DragonFlyer

    DragonFlyer

    O – how much fun it can be to keep just that one step ahead of the devil… Though – such a bummer when ‘he’ flukes a jump in ahead of you once in a while….
    This is cool Helen – keep on keeping up ;)))
    K xx

  • H M Bascom replied

    Thanks Kallena, I will keep on!

  • Ushna Sardar
  • H M Bascom replied

    Wow! Thanks Ushna!

  • bloorain

    bloorain 26 days ago

    great poem, I enjoyed every bit of it :)

  • H M Bascom replied 26 days ago

    Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it.

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