Word Versus Word

H M Bascom
Author: H M Bascom
Word Count: 50
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Word Versus Word

Words. How will you use them?


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I read a word
it was not a big word
four letters
no more

but this word
though not a big word
had power
to hurt

I wrote a word
a really big word
four letters
no less

and this word
was such a big word
with power
to heal


  • lollybug

    lollybug

    Awesome. :)

  • Tara Sheffer-Archie

    Tara Sheffer-A...

    That is awesome!!! Well written…....could be so many things, but I will go with Hate and Love…... : )

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Christopher  Ewing

    Christopher E...

    i like this, makes one think.

  • Judith Oppenheimer

    Judith Oppenhe...

    very cool.

  • abfabphoto

    abfabphoto

    Wonderful Helen! :)

  • Marion  Cullen

    Marion Cullen

    What a clever, clever writer you are Helen.

  • Mark Peterson

    Mark Peterson

    Beautiful, excellent, awesome!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    absolutely bloody brilliant!!!!!!!! Helen, you are incredible!

  • sweetscent62

    sweetscent62

    Awesome Helen : ) well done.. Wen x

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    Awsome Helen!!! Very creative.

  • VanSnuG

    VanSnuG

    WORDS … the two-edged S…Word…S

  • H M Bascom replied

    Oh you sir are a very clever human being!

  • Kelly  J

    Kelly J

    Oh how clever!!!!! Brilliant writing helen! Certainly makes you think – Choose your words carefully I always say!!! :)

  • MelanieSpeaks

    MelanieSpeaks

    Wonderful…well done

  • Juilee  Pryor

    Juilee Pryor

    beautiful Helen…. words hey….yes words indeed…. maybe we need to realize that typing is not talking as well…... good one…

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Love…..!!Good one Helen

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    Beautifully crafted Helen, delicately structured.
    says to me love more, hate less, heal hurt .

  • H M Bascom replied

    We teach our children that there are bad words, not to be spoken. Then the children grow up, and it seems some of them remember only the bad words. sigh

    We should speak, write, act kindly to one another. And if we can’t be kind, at least be respectful.

    Thank you Matt.

  • Susan Bergstrom

    Susan Bergstrom

    Love this…beautiful!

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais

    Amber Elizabet...

    Thank you for this Helen it is exqisite and so powerful =) words do have so much power x

  • HenkStolk

    HenkStolk

    spot on

  • cougarfan

    cougarfan

    Soooooooooo True….....Well Said Helen:))))))))))xooxox

  • ufosIsee

    ufosIsee

    I could picture the true meaning of this so well Helen…...... Nice message…

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    Excellent written sweetheart helen! Congratulations!!

  • Mark Gardner

    Mark Gardner

    wonderfully written Helen

  • katykatykaty

    katykatykaty

    Ah, the last stanza gave me smiles. This poem could go with so many moods. Today I am in the mood for love, so I will go with love. :]

  • Danny

    Danny

    I suggest you build on this
    hurt,hate, heal,have,hugs,halt, harm, hale, hang and hope
    just a few suggestions.
    could be an epic.
    good stuff

  • bearpaw

    bearpaw

    wow…just wow…

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    I’d say this was love and yes that word can cause just as much as pain as it can give pleasure

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    I read this and thought…..yep simple and beautifully crafted and just so right. Words like these together also spell inspire :)))

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    wonderful. Such a powerful story in such a short poem.

  • GreenWitch

    GreenWitch

    Whatever I write it won’t be enough to say how great this feels…
    Superb.

  • Marie Monroe

    Marie Monroe

    very nice, helen!

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    nice work

  • JenLand

    JenLand 18 days ago

    Fantastic! Powerful, artistic, amazing work!! Almost (heh heh) speechless! :o)

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