"Obvious or not"

A good detective
sees what others clearly miss
right under our nose


Russell Holder

"Obvious or not" by

This is a clear attempt at Senryu… a try at ‘River Willow,’ and a first to use the irony of mockery to that which we call sight in America, blinded by our own up-bringing and conditioning placed upon us.

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  • HamperRefuser
    HamperRefuser4 months ago

    Haha true that mate. Awesome thought.

  • Thanks Nathan… and I appreciate it.

    – Russell Holder

  • markhadafairday
    markhadafairday4 months ago

    this is true. well said

  • Much thanks Mark, and I hope you have a great day.

    – Russell Holder

  • autumnwind
    autumnwind4 months ago

    Very well done!!! : )) xoxoxoxoxo

  • Thanks Shar, I don’t focus a lot on Hai-ku or Senryu but do appreciate the styles and purposes to them, a concert in a note or two. LOL A six pack in a glass. xo

    – Russell Holder