unconvincing
unconvincing belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, The Word Tree and WMGThey say time
heals all wounds,
But it seems
scars never fade
Innocence of youth
is torn away
When a child sees things
they never should
The rage…
The hate…
The blame…
The sadness
A child that
grows up faster,
than they should
ever have to
Exposed
The taunts…
The anger…
The acid tongue
Why don’t they
just walk away
from each other,
Call it quits…
They make the vow,
To change,
To make it better
They make the vow,
To believe in their lie…
melodious
AWESOME Writing, Wow!!! I like how the ending brings you back to the title… yes, unconvincing… sad… but such truth…. Great stuff my friend :)))
here goes replied
i appreciate you reading and your generous comment…as always. thankyou for connecting mel ;o)
Sally Omar
These words say so so much and it is an excellent writing…very sad…very true….Sally xxoo
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thanks so much sally…
Christine Till...
Excellent writing, so sad and so true.
You’re a true artist with words.
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wow, thankyou for your kind comments ;o)