wash over me

here goes
Author: here goes
Word Count: 79
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wash over me

wash over me belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: , The Word Tree and WMG

come up for air, a heavy sigh,
friday’s end draws near

close the door, turn the tide
head bowed, neck is strained
feel the tension subside
with every burning needle

let it permeate the mind
wash away what was
shoulders drop, inhale
the heart, it rises

white knuckles pull through hair
angst drips to the floor
turn the tide, open the door
look to the heavens

a deep breath, this time no sigh
perhaps when we next meet

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Excellent…deep!!!! Sally xxoo

  • here goes replied

    very kind…thankyou

  • iamveo

    iamveo

    fantastic writing, i can really feel this

  • here goes replied

    thanks luke…!! it’s amazing how easily a tough week can take a turn for the better…

  • melodious

    melodious

    brilliant, brilliant writing! expresses so much!

  • here goes replied

    thankyou…am enjoying the writing!

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