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some days in the dim lit scenery
that surrounds my catastrophe
i find myself thinking of you.
there, in that slow motion lapse of time
i wonder if you’re thinking of me too,
and i hope those memories fucking burn;
i hope they hurt like
the hell i keep falling into.
i used to clench my hands
praying you’d find happiness,
to the point of blood loss and numbness,
but now i’m not even close to sorry
when i say
i don’t give a fuck
if you’re hurt, alone, and used-
you have it coming;
five knuckles of karma
to your heavy breathing,
ecstasy screaming
bull-fucking-shit of a mentality.
yeah, i am a dick, but you my dear
are a world class
bitch.

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Comments

  • moto-cycle
    moto-cyclealmost 4 years ago

    I know that one should not laugh when reading some thing as painful as you just wrote. But when I read I hope those memories fucking burn, I laughed as it would be something that I might say. I love this writing and I love you for being straight forward and honest. really David

  • yeah it does have a whimsicle side :) thank you so much man

    – Nathan Emery

  • Misunderstood24
    Misunderstood24almost 4 years ago

    Powerfully honest and in your face.
    Wonderful write Nathan.
    love and respect

  • thank you so much stephen. much love

    – Nathan Emery

  • jshade
    jshadealmost 4 years ago

    This write speaks volumes bro. Great write.
    Love and Respect

  • thank you so much bro.

    – Nathan Emery

  • S .
    S .almost 4 years ago

    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dude
    you f***kin killed it on this one ! wow
    so good

  • thanks man! i was just a tad pissed when i wrote this :)

    – Nathan Emery

  • IzzyGumbo
    IzzyGumboalmost 4 years ago

    this blows my mind Nathan
    incredible writing with so much honest passion.

  • wow. thank you so much for this

    – Nathan Emery

  • B-Money
    B-Moneyalmost 4 years ago

    Ahhh I love this!! :D

  • haha thank youuuu

    – Nathan Emery

  • SaveMePlease
    SaveMePleasealmost 4 years ago

    Yup, this is wonderful. :)

  • :) thank you very much

    – Nathan Emery

  • Jascie Epinn
    Jascie Epinnalmost 4 years ago

    I love this! The perfect balance of reality and mischief! The flow was immaculate.

  • thank you so much :) making me smile over here haha

    – Nathan Emery

  • Butterfly66
    Butterfly66almost 4 years ago

    Dude… You really are very good. Love the ending, funny how love after a break up goes from missing one to hatred. I suppose this why they say there is a very thin line between love and hate. xoxoxo Butterfly

  • haha wow thank you so much and i totally agree. this was a feeling surfaced from a relationship end over a year ago that i got caught up thinking about.

    – Nathan Emery

  • DeeLishess
    DeeLishessalmost 4 years ago

    i think this is how everyone has felt about an ex at some point in their lives. great imagery, powerful language. i’ve been through the same stuff. at first when someone would break my heart, everyone but me would be mad. they’d want to beat him up while i’d just wish for his happiness. then, after i healed from the pain of wanting him back, i would despise him for doing me the way he did. sometimes, i will occasionally still feel this way. great write. thanks for capturing the ambivalence of human emotion! (suggestion, if you want it: hint in the poem about what she did that made her so evil in your eyes. just a thought. the piece is great like this, but i wouldn’t mind seeing what you had to go through that eventually turned you to ice where she’s concerned.) Sorry I’ve gone on so long lol great work!

  • haha yes relationships are unhealthy at times, but i dont want to hint at anything because i want this to be relateable and keep the reader thinking. thankyou for this comment though! really cool to read your feedback

    – Nathan Emery

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