Brainstorm

Nathan Emery
Author: Nathan Emery
Word Count: 107
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Brainstorm

a simple thought can ignite a fire inside of us

Brainstorm belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Colors of the Wind, Inspired By Life, Midnight Ramblers and The beauty of poetry

The soft footstep rain knocks on the glass from outside,
and the scent of wet earth caresses my thoughts.
A parched mind cries out for a solitary drink, and the
freshly fallen rain quenches the thirsts within.

this once comforting drizzle has now become violent;
darkening clouds collide in a bright visual spectacle.
It sends shockwaves throughout my lost body,
while I sit, and prepare for the funnel cloud formation.

Wind of a brainstorm overpowers all logic
as a tornado of idea touches down on dry soil.
Spin my head together in a vortex of possibility
while I’m pelted with the hail of a thousand interjections.

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Such an open glance into your soul….this is truly beautiful. The descriptions are captivating. xoxo

  • Nathan Emery replied

    thank you so much that. it means alot.

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    Excellent use of metaphor to create vivid images with words.

  • Nathan Emery replied

    thank you for stopping by.

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    Love the metaphor usage in the write..this is totally cool work.

  • Nathan Emery replied

    thank you very much. it came together in like 10 minutes.

  • Fiona Christensen

    Fiona Christensen

    This is really beautiful! i love the imagery and everything about it!!!!! stunning piece!

  • Nathan Emery replied

    thanks for reading! it is nice to meet you.

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