LONELINESS...................................
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Here I am…..now….again…
surrounded. bounded and HOUNDED by things/thoughts unknown…perhaps misunderstood, or not understood at all….just fuckin things!
things…
THINGS???!!!!!!
Here I am…..
within a space uncomfortable within a space so real and known, and accustomed to,
Here I am…
Who the FUCK am I?
why the Fuck am I?
tick tock…tick tock…
when is it , i know by whom I am surrounded? When will I know why? When will I know?
Here I am…
Here I am…
Here I am…
I just…...am….....
s t i l l d o n ….t .....k n o w …..... w h y?.................................................
is it
that
Here I
a m …..............................
Naked
Stripped of cultural garb…..
yet
dressed
in my own
garb
, my own design,
my
own,
.....
within
my own
loneliness
within
my own …. mind
Here I am…
Damn it
Here I am….....
go ahead….
paint this shit!
cuz
HERE
I
AM…...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Crowmanic
Woooo… there young lady…. you havin’ another bad hair day…
helene ruiz replied
lmao
Sally Omar
OMG…please put this in THE SISTERHOOD…when don’t we have days like this? Awesome
writing…a definite fav…now when I feel like this I can read your piece and know I am not alone!!
xoxoxoxoxo
helene ruiz replied
l o n e l i n e s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s …....within the known…......
Narcissus17
interesting discourse structure ! :P And on another technical point; you’ve said “bounded,” which is a past-tense verb meaning to leap or move at great pace. You mean the present-tense bound.
Wait, my know-it-all helpfullness extends still further. If you want to keep the rhyme then you could change your syntax:
by unknown things/thoughts that surround, bound and HOUND me.
:D
helene ruiz replied
like that!...thnx
helene ruiz replied
but…...who”s to say…..may be past tense….....hmmmmmmmmm
Anthea Slade
Intense…raw…real and honest my frien Helene. I can truly relate to how you are feeling. Beautiful emotional writing…I feel every word. Lots of love Anthea xx
helene ruiz replied
THNX ANTHEA
Crowmanic
what is IMAO?
helene ruiz
laughin my ass off
Druidstorm
All around me the same yet my taste is drained
This floor my path these walls hollow chains
Inside I scream yet my silence never heard
I am here take my pain!
Helene your pain is felt friend! Beautiful words!!!...)o(
helene ruiz replied
yes…...inside…..i scream
my silence
never’
heard
take this pain!
Paul (Quixote)...
Very moody. I understand your thoughts Helene. Nice to see you so expressive in words.
helene ruiz replied
YEA…WORDS AND ME….LOL….NOT VREY USUAL…I SUCK WHEN IT COMES TO VERBAL EXPRESSION…THNX FOR UNDERSTANDING
Cheryl McDonald
indeed
helene ruiz replied
OH….
TOO MANY OF US KNOW
THATS THE SAD PART.
THNX CHERYL
ambient-1
Dear Helene, my good friend once told me, “wherever you are, there you are.” I feel alone even when I’m at a party. So, I can so relate. Please know that you have friends here. Hugs
helene ruiz replied
XXOXX
colorblind
you should know that alone you may feel
colorblind is always around ….just remove your veil…..
love the poem
expression well felt
...as humans we feel this emotion
so you’re not alone….
helene ruiz replied
awe….xxoxx
H M Bascom
WOW.
Michelle Barlo...
BRAVO
RosaCobos
Yes you are…..
inmmersed in a solliloquy..of questions and uncomfortableness….
sometimes our being feels like a cheat cotton t-shirt after being washed with warm water..it simple shrinks…and then the feelings, sensations and even the skin cannot hold that Essence that is pushing outwardly as if a nova….and all these questions and loneliness become from the narrow prespective that our soul cannot stand… we need place… space… and though we are social entities…. we need…. loneliness…. individuation… you are there…yes..
you… are
Rosa
helene ruiz replied
xxooxx
linaji
GOD THIS ROCKS….
helene ruiz replied
awe…ur such a sweetie
xxooxx
erich biemer
it is good to howl at the moon….
helene ruiz replied
:-)
Tron
Excellent expression…
Antek
Amazing Emotion.
Shoaib .
yessss !!! F-in awesome !!!
AngelMay
As raymondoantonio says, it is what we do with our time that defines us….well defined Helene
helene ruiz replied
thnx angel
annamora
Helene … I would like to say : we are here … but then I know that the computer screen is not exactly something what could replace actual ‘touch’ ... anyway – hugs :) hope you are painting now :)
helene ruiz replied
smilez…how’d u know…xxooxx
Gili Orr
Missed this earlier… so you are good with words, too;-) I really like it. I tend to give up on answers these days, though I came up with some in the past and may come up with others (or the same) some day. Can’t buy ready-made answers, somehow, not for long, anyway…. I like your raw honesty and simplicity of expression, no big words, no exeggerations, just as-is.
helene ruiz replied
xxooxx