I’ve posted this one before, but I’m reposting because it’s disappeared into the bowels of the archive and I’ve just entered it in the writing competition!
Beached
did i think
if I left my body untended
momentarily
I would lose the way back
drown in my mother’s image
who is lost
and drifting aimlessly
in unknown shoreless seas
did I make
of thought an anchor
and a crown
a heavy chainbound god
to whom I clung
in desperation
bereft
with nothing else
to call my own
the world I inhabit
is not my own
I squat
on the shore
counting and recounting
particles of sand
my father’s house
is crumbling to the ground
if I am finally set adrift
washed free by waves
and pulled
into the tidal swell
all markers will be lost
and I
a piece of driftwood
bleached to bone
might drift to shore again
might not return
Shaddy, about 1 year ago
Wow! I love that Helene. Thanks for dragging that out of the archives and good luck with the competition! I’ve been thinking about doing some creative writing of my own. I just need a little bit more confidence I think…..
Helene Kippert, about 1 year ago
Give it a go Shaddy – you’ll get lots of support around here! Thanks for your comment.
Jessica Tremp, about 1 year ago
sad and beautiful
Helene Kippert, about 1 year ago
Thanks Jessica
shanghaiwu, about 1 year ago
it’s wonderful
Chris White, about 1 year ago
Beautifully written Helene, sad and haunting. I like how you’ve tied the characters in with the landscape.
gaypony, about 1 year ago
great poem.
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Shanina Conway, about 1 year ago
This is beautiful Helene, I’m glad you pulled it out;)
Phil Eckert, about 1 year ago
A beautiful piece Helene…........
Helene Kippert, about 1 year ago
Thanks so much for all your comments! :O)
vjwriggs, about 1 year ago
Wow very beautiful and strong I like it great.
mawaho, about 1 year ago
An amazing piece. I’m conjuring up a refugee. A coincidence that I also wrote about ‘driftwood’!
Helene Kippert, about 1 year ago
Thanks vj.
I was thinking the same thing mawaho – thanks for your comment!
Robert Knapman, about 1 year ago
Lovely writing Helen. I’ve read it several times now. Love that – when you feel the need to get further under the skin so to spaek. Cheers .)
Helene Kippert, about 1 year ago
Thanks Robert. :o)
PennyEdwardes, 12 months ago
A touching and emotional poem Helene! You writing is as wonderful as your talent
Helene Kippert, 12 months ago
Thanks Penny!
Randy Johnson, 12 months ago
Thank you so much. Loved your writing. Very nicely written. Your comments mean lot to me. thanks so much again
Helene Kippert, 12 months ago
Thanks Randy.
Steven Sandner, 11 months ago
Beautiful poem, good luck with the competition! (your poem actually makes me want to go to the beach, the sea carries so much power and history)
Silvia Manuela, 6 months ago
very enjoyable read
Leon Walker, 5 months ago
Excellent as well!!!
Helene Kippert, 5 months ago
Thanks Steven, Silvia and lawalker :o)