What Happens When Waiting Ends?

Tender ice he holds in his eyes
Penetrates every glass window
The corner shop. Its awning stretched
stripes glisten in every atmospheric breath.
She strides indoors below the keep
The southern sun’s about to sleep
Slumbering shadows beneath her chin
Thicken as the night grows in

Innocent minds they play the dice
More readily when they don’t know the price
Love’s a word deserved by some
Like every gentle downward strum
She waits beneath the musky space
He watches in to see her face

The tingle of his brassy cloak
All the shattering hellos he spoke
she lifts her head and kills the shadows
the whipping pen faints and mellows
Her linen shoulders melt and taper
As his crackled hands reveal the paper
Cumbersome consonants drum her ears
His icey eyes melt
Hers dull and swelt

Innocent minds they play the dice
More readily when they don’t know the price
Love’s a word deserved by some
Like every gentle downward strum
She waits beneath the musky space
His hand glides over her powder face

His arms of freckled spice
The tender almond curls
His fireplace pupils
Will grace her never more


Heather Dawn

What Happens When Waiting Ends? by

I feel as though there’s something missing, or lost about this piece.
When you learn your waiting is done, not by his return, but by the means of his inexistence, do you keep waiting?

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love, war, letters

Comments

  • HopePeace110
    HopePeace110about 3 years ago

    This is so good heather, seriously…i love it. =]

  • Thanks Michele I’m glad you like it=)

    – Heather Dawn

  • Cassey
    Casseyabout 3 years ago

    This is so true.
    Innocent minds they play the dice / More readily when they don’t know the price

    I like this piece very much. Good writing. Really good.

  • Thanks so much for taking the time to read it! This is a huge compliment coming from such a great writer!
    Thank you=)

    – Heather Dawn