Dream Lover

Author: Peter Evans
Word Count: 351
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I awoke with a start but don’t move, unfamiliar surroundings I see.

My eyes slowly move about the part of the room I can see.
My brain takes in the soft furnishings, the dressing table…... not mine,
crowded with exotic perfume bottles.
A fine upholstered chair over an arm of which is draped a pair of black laced French legged pants.

I smile, the erection I have throbs knowingly.
I slowly turn over and you are there…..... asleep, nude, luxurious.

I rest my head on my hand lying next to you watching you sleep.
Your long eye lashes occasionally fluttering.
Your cute nose.
Beautiful lips surrounding a mouth I so much want.
Your breathing soft, sweet and slow.
Your lips suddenly curl into a small smile.
I glance down to your breasts so round and perfect
slowly rising and falling with each breath.
Your nipples are erect and inviting.
Are you dreaming of me?

My eyes wander over your flat stomach
taking in the firmness of your muscles and
the cute sexiness of your belly button
where I love to play with my tongue and
it makes you laugh.

I let me eyes travel further…. slowly….. over your beautiful Mons Venus
the small patch of neatly trimmed hair leading to a place I worship.
My tongue slowly wets my lips and I taste you on me.
Again my cock waves about …......remembering.

My eyes slowly take in your hips the sensual rise of your hip bone
where I love to bite gently because it gives you so much pleasure.
I travel further down, my senses overwhelmed with what I am seeing.
Legs so feminine but my neck knows how strong they can be.
Down to your feet, my eyes taking in these usually least looked upon body parts that you enjoy being kissed with toes painted a sensuous red and which you loved to be sucked.

I suddenly notice your breathing has changed.
I glance back to your face.
You are awake
and smiling up at me.
Eyes of liquid diamonds.
You raise your arms…........
I fall under your spell.

Dream Lover

Dream Lover belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Blue Room, Live, Love, Dream, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Adult Group and The Sensual Word

Bevsimages, 4 months ago

Very sensual gave me goosebumps & no too vulgar lol ;D great work x :))
bamagirl38, 4 months ago

Oh Peter….......... This is veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice!!!!! :)
ein22, 4 months ago

Very nice puffs cigarette

Oh yeah….
Peter Evans in reply to Bevsimages’s comment, 4 months ago

Goosebumps hey :-) love that.
Thanks Bev
doug61853, 4 months ago

Great work!! Do you write a lot of these, If so maybe you should see about publishing them.
Peter Evans in reply to doug61853’s comment, 4 months ago

No mate to tell you the truth I haven’t. I do have a few but publishing lol…..get out of here :-)
Peter Evans in reply to bamagirl38’s comment, 4 months ago

I appreciate your kind words Boni, I am also very happy you enjoyed it.
That was my virgin release so to speak :-)
Peter Evans in reply to ein22’s comment, 4 months ago

Thanks Duuude, glad you liked it.
I’m looking fwd to hear / see some of your work lol outside of the classroom lol
deliriousgirl, 4 months ago

HOTHOTHOT!
Peter Evans, 4 months ago

Thanks DG :-) very much appreciated as your one of my inspirations !!
bamagirl38, 4 months ago

This is now a daily feature in the group Live, Love, Dream ! Thanks for being a wonderful member and keep these awesome posts coming!
Bonita :)
wendyL, 4 months ago

WoW! Peter, you are a fantastic writer..I think i have told you this before..I don’t fave many writings….I will infact be faving this!
wendyL, 4 months ago

Congrats for being chosen as a feature artist in the Live, Love, Dream Group!!!!!!
Peter Evans in reply to wendyL’s comment, 4 months ago

Thanks Wendy, much appreciated !!
Peter Evans in reply to wendyL’s comment, 4 months ago

Am I ?, huge grin, I’d better go and check it out !!
Thanks again !!
Peter Evans in reply to bamagirl38’s comment, 4 months ago

Thank YOU wonderful lady. I am very flattered :-)
Sally Omar, 4 months ago

Peter, Extremely sensual and in good taste…Sally xxoo
Peter Evans in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, 4 months ago

Thanks Sally, so happy you enjoyed it..Peter x
LisaG, 4 months ago

This is beyond erotic; this is the sweet worship of physical love that is not bound solely by the physical….no this encapsulates so much more.

Beautiful, moving writing…
LisaB entity, 4 months ago

gorgeously invitingly edible writing AWESOME PETER !!
JenniferB, 4 months ago

mmm… now why did I have to stumble and fall upon this hot little gem during my moment of celibacy!!! gggrrrr ~~the things I would like to say and do if only…~~ ;-)

MWAH!

xox
Trish Cooper, 4 months ago

WOW WOW WOW Peter….now that is some damn fine writing my friend!!!!! So sensual so erotic….you balanced out walking the line of erotic, sensual writing….instead of distasteful writing perfectly…. This is fantastic Peter!!!!!! Straight to my fav’s this goes!!!!! Hugs Trisha xoxox
Peter Evans in reply to LisaG’s comment, 4 months ago

Hi Lisa,

I’m trying VERY hard not to explore everyone else’s work and am catching up. Thank you so much for this stunning complement. I am deeply flattered. xxx
wishingonstars, 4 months ago

WOW!!!! Beautiful, she must have been a lucky women.
Rielle, 4 months ago

Well, there u go making me itch now, every woman wants to be adored, Gorgeous X
Peter Evans in reply to Rielle’s comment, 4 months ago

I only wish I could help you scratch it :-)
Thanks Rielle.
Peter Evans in reply to wishingonstars’s comment, 4 months ago

Thank you very much I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Are you in country ??
ENaLu, 3 months ago

Adored so well!!
Peter Evans in reply to ENaLu’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks so much En :-)
juice, 3 months ago

this is very sensual, arousing and delightful to read…
rojaburbuja, 3 months ago

Peter…I remember it well….every women and man who have valued such an intimate moment….can recall those beautiful moments..they are when time go fasts but somehow also stands still…when nothing is this world can hold you both back and this closeness, it semms, cannot be repeated….ahhhhhhhhh memories for us all….I am at ‘total recall’...ahhhhhhhh emmmmmmmmmmm ;-))))))))))))))))))
Peter Evans in reply to rojaburbuja’s comment, 3 months ago

Wow I’m glad you like it so much.
There are very special moments indeed.
I think that the first time I’ve got turned on over a comment ;-)))) xxx
flipteez, 3 months ago

You took my breath away & now I BEG for more XXXXXX
Peter Evans, 3 months ago

hmmm I just don’t know Flip…........... are you on your knees ? ;-)
tinhearts, 2 months ago

i may decide to live another day just to dream of this sensual touch once again…thank you for such a lovely image and the pleasure it brought to me ;)
love, carol
xxx
Peter Evans in reply to tinhearts’s comment, 2 months ago

Wow what a complement.
Thanks so much Carol I’m sincerely happy I was able to bring you pleasure ;)
You have to live on beauty like your can’t just die :)
Love
Peter
xxxx
PS Thanks for the fav :-)
Peter Evans in reply to juice’s comment, 2 months ago

Thanks very much Juice :-)
LauraHartley, 2 months ago

Peter, this is some of the most erotic and yet romantic work I have ever seen written by a man. It is SO compelling, I am DYING to hear the rest, now that her eyes are opened and you are aware of it…..oh yeh, baby, don’t leave us dangling!
Peter Evans in reply to LauraHartley’s comment, 2 months ago

Yeah sometimes I think I’m a lesbian in a mans body they way I adore women and can communicate at other levels with them and endeavour to give as much pleasure as I can to them, crazy hey lol
Peter Evans in reply to tinhearts’s comment, 2 months ago

Did I thank you for the fav wonderful lady /
Thanks :-)
tinhearts, 2 months ago

your smile is my thank you ;)
Peter Evans, 2 months ago

Awwww shucks, now I’m the one blushing xx :-)
Hans Goepel, about 1 month ago

Congratulation Peter for getting it right not many guys understand a women needs. I also love women so very much.
George Yesthal, about 1 month ago

Wow! Just read this and really like it. Very sensuos without making one feel like a voyeur to read it. I’d like to read more of your writing. Also…GREAT photography.
Peter Evans in reply to Hans Goepel’s comment, about 1 month ago

Thanks Hans, they are wonderful beings :-)
Peter Evans in reply to George Yesthal’s comment, about 1 month ago

Thanks George very much appreciated.
Just had a quick look at your work, very impressive.
I’ll go back and have a more thorough look shortly :-)
AMWphoto, about 1 month ago

“A place I worship”

“Eyes of liquid diamonds.
You raise your arms…….....
I fall under your spell.”

So sensuous and beautiful. You honor the act of lovemaking. Thank you.

Do you know the work of Galway Kinnell? This reminds me of his “Last Gods.” Marvelous!
Peter Evans in reply to AMWphoto’s comment, about 1 month ago

No I can’t say that I do.
This is the first time I have ever written anything.
If your recommending him to me I’ll check it out.
Thanks so much for your fantastic comments, very much appreciated :)
I’ve got a Part 2 in my head just don’t seem to be able to put it down, maybe I should look through your site again for inspiration ;)
tinhearts, about 1 month ago

i had to be filled with this magic once again..the tenderness you have for seeing and giving pleasure is refreshing~
xx
flipteez, 29 days ago

HEY YOU when are we getting seconds ?
You SOOOOOOOOOOO got it kiddo !!! XXXX
AMWphoto, 26 days ago

I recently started writing poetry too, and kind of was pleased with the results. Hard to believe it’s your first attempt. Great! (Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, been out of town for a while.)
Peter Evans in reply to tinhearts’s comment, 25 days ago

Thanks Carol now if only I could get the continuation down on paper lol xx
Peter Evans in reply to flipteez’s comment, 25 days ago

Hi Flip ;)
Its coming (yeah I know so’s Xmas) I just gotta stop looking at everyone elses work and concentrate on my own :)
tinhearts, 25 days ago

you got it down in my heart~
your touch reaches out to others too..
mission well done ;)
Peter Evans in reply to tinhearts’s comment, 18 days ago

Thank you Carol you have just given me the inspiration xx