Revolving

David Haviland
Author: David Haviland
Word Count: 24
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Gravity keeps us together
Gravity keeps us apart
Satellites
Revolving
Eternally orbiting
Eternally connected
Planets
Revolving
Infinitely entwined
Infinitely seperated
Sun, Earth, Moon
Revolving

Revolving

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, about 1 year ago

    Mmm…i like that…it feels almost like a mantra one could use when feeling disconnected.

  • David Haviland

    David Haviland, about 1 year ago

    Thank you, that is the feel that I was going for, the whole thing started with the word revolving and I felt that by its very nature I needed to keep coming back to that word, revolving.

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