further than the heart allows
a new form haiku.
further than the heart allows belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Love Bullets, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Art of Pain and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!beyond the sun
another moon,
and just as cold
© Kristin Reynolds 5 22 09
Skypilot
Chilly indeed!...xo
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes sir…terrifying. xo
cosimopiro
You have taken me there and I am feeling the coldness. Maybe we should return to the arms of our loved ones. xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, but that is not the path for me…this is the path of cannot go back, once begun…it is a horrible truth. but truth all the same. and I intend to get to the end and begin.
lianne
Wow – just terrific Kristin. New form indeed but just as masterfully done!
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks, lianne. :)
Trenchtownrock
This is well done but it leaves me sad Kristin…the new moon is suppose to lead to eternity of bliss not be as cold as the one discarded…you are very good with this form.
Kristin Reynolds replied
don’t be sad, my friend. :) it can be no other way. void is a cold hard bitch of a thing.
thanks, dear. xo
Christie Moses
so cold :( indeed….xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
indeed. xoxo
Druidstorm
The void but empty and so so cold! Powerful words friend!!!...)o(
Kristin Reynolds replied
Exactly. :) glad you saw the void in here; that was my intent. nothing scarier than looking it in the face, and keeping on moving forward anyway…smiling.
xo
Michael Degenh...
The shortness of this write and its clarity makes the reader stop short and just go “wow”, the feeling within this is true, but as well sad. You express yourself so clearly and well. Michael
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks, M xo
Shoaib .
4 4 4 well haiku meeee
ummm ya know what i wanna see… a rhyming haiku…. extended
i know ya love the challenge… here’s mine
what ya got for meeeeeeeeeeee
:))))))) love ya kido
Kristin Reynolds replied
alright, you know I never back down from a damn challenge…K vs S…best not make a show called..shit…lol…i was going to say K vs S as in Kristin vs Shoaib…ha! it would still be K vs s! lol
love it!
but yeah…gunna do it right the F now!
xo
bluewhite
My hands feel it.
Kristin Reynolds replied
brrrrr! :)
JRGarland
A blistering cold
Needs the sun to bring its warmth
A new dawn awaits
Kristin Reynolds replied
ahhh…love the haiku, JR. you aught to post this beauty. :)
thank you for balancing my cold head verse. :)
xo
Erika .
oh wow….it’s like an eternal winter. A blue planet of ice and bitter winds….so so cold. I feel it.
But like JR said, a new dawn awaits….
Such inspired writing from you always, K. Hugs, XXX
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes, eternally cold out there in the void.
thank you dear one! xo
Blanchot
Stunningly powerful punch for such a few words. This is a perfect representation of the power of words. What amazing and scary instruments they are! There are things past that moon, yet again, thankfully. Just know it! Me
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, dear man!
yes, exactly.
I know there are…but they are only made of skin and bone…the reality is: COLD.
but for now, for here, thank you, love you, K.B.I.T.C.H
cosimopiro
In that case Kristin I commend your fearlessness and determination to reach the end and begin. Know this….I, like so many others that have shared a part of your journey, are with you. If we can’t go back to the arms of loved ones then we’ll take love with us. xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
Why thank you, C. :) I feel you all there, and, if we all huddle together for warmth, we just may make it together. isn’t that a lovely thought? thank you for it. :)
xoxo beautiful soul you are. xo
Cindirelli
Can totally relate to this, Kristin. Yes, beyond the sun is another moon. However, on that journey you find yourself and what truly makes you happy. . .inside and out. And ditto to what cosimopiro said. ~:)