Raising the Dead -cinquian

Such power in your carefuly crafted words K, you are a wonderfully intelligent writer xx

I very much like this Kristin – to be able to say so much and capture a metaphor in so few words takes real skill. Really well done – the image is perfect.

wow. this is powerful. and yes, like Lianne wrote, takes great skill, which you are overflowing with to pack so much with so few words. love this. xoxoxo

Great metaphor. I think you will be worth eating… ; )

they say there is time, but not an infinite time, to do what we need. after that it may be too late. no time to daydream – your words are chilling reminders, timely reminders, a much needed alarm! x

oh wow your words give me chills Kristin. It has been like this for me for the past few weeks….it’s like these “zombies” have some unfinished business. You can’t bury them unless your thoroughly through with them. Kind of like vampires: the living dead. You have to put some emotions to rest by driving a stake through them until they can finally rest in peace. But first you have to admit their existence and feel them. Well at least that’s how it is for me. Thank you for sharing this K….it sort of wraps things up for me at the moment. Much love to you. And sorry I’ve been missing so much of your work lately…I’ve not been entirely here. xxx

How often do we have new emotions? ...other than perhaps, just emotions with more, added flesh on the skeleton of primordial ones… one can only exhume old memories that may trigger what appears to be old emotions, only now coated with and fine tuned by the bitter-sweet, time-as-life subsequent thought-feelings.
... hey Kristin, that was dr Ho talking again… see, I indulge in split personality thought threatening experiences. But you my friend, indulge in powerful, soul awakening poetry in small pills, each containing a lifetime of wisdom.
And this, my friend, is what keeps me coming back for more. Thank you.

Ooh, perfect Halloween poem!

exceptional metaphor,
somehow I don’t find it scary, it is too much of a reality.

Love
xoxox

Perfect script for the time. It’s scary to think of the truer meaning behind this piece. LOL Very well written.

i agree that for a short poem, you said a lot. i love it..

Power plus!!!! Short, maybe not so sweet, but a helluva lot of truth. Brilliant!!!!! xoxo

Time appears to move more slowly when life is joyously lived.
A chilling thought as a shiver, is how time moves very quickly if life is
spent dwelling in hostilities and regret.

very thriller like….sharpened sweetness

Just when you think they are buried, those damn Zombies raise up again…wiley suckers.
seriously, this is bittersweet beautiful xxx

awesome writing

Wonderfully written X

I speak as I find my dear canuk friend….xo