poetry --tanka sequence

Author: Kristin Reynolds
Word Count: 82
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poetry…

these are the records
our engineers left behind
the secret god words
strung with stars on subtle threads
sewn into poet’s fingers

and when earth is read
the sky will rain red sea verse
upon their elders
coating them with mother’s blood
balancing their weighted scales…

and when we are read,
and all the words have spoken,
left at our left feet,
we shall pick each letter up,
and write out our world once more…

erich biemer

this makes me say YES!
Kristin Reynolds replied

YAY! Me too. :) so glad to hear it! xo
JaneSolomon

Wonderful Kristin! xx
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, sweet Jane! xo
skinnyman

Lovely writing K. another ‘age of man’ will dawn upon us soon…with any luck..:) xx
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, Peter! xo
cosimopiro

Kristin, lovely work. A poet’s job never ends.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Yes, indeed. :) thanks, friend. xo
lianne

Oh absolutely YES! Incredibly and perfectly true in an exquisite write.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, Lianne! xo
Rhenastarr

Beautifully expressed.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, Rhena! xo
Christie Moses

Yes indeed :)
So beautiful K
xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks, hun! xo
Leon Walker

Really great work Kristin!!!
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you so much, Leon! xo
ArcadiaTempest

You will write and they will read….that is the inspiration of your words me thinks :o) XX
Kristin Reynolds replied

Well, I don’t know about reading me, but maybe the message left behind of all we struggled so hard to understand and relay will be recieved somehow, and if not? we do it again. xo :)
hsien-ku

if it is true that we abandoned ones can still create legominisms, then this is surely one of them. beautiful work kristin!
Kristin Reynolds replied

We can hope with purpose; what else can we do, but do what we will.
thank you, warrior. xo
raymondoantonio

POWERFUL WYRD! XO
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, dear! xo
Trenchtownrock

This is the type of poetry that will be read in literature classes someday…excellent write.
Kristin Reynolds replied

That is very kind of you to say, dear one, I doubt it, but perhaps the message will be read in the sky by the gods…xo poetry is very powerful…all of us put together, maybe…we can save us.
TheWanderingBoo

incredibly beautiful
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, WB!!
bill bell

Beautiful K-Bird, I can’t keep up with you, the monk is a slow reader :)
Kristin Reynolds replied

Monks usually are. :) fear not! I love you, slowpoke. I’ve been pretty darn slow myself as of late – life, you know, always going along…:)