The Rabbit and The Shark – A Remembered Tale
This was written for a contest on incorperating a human emotion with two seperate animals…
and me, being me, of course had to bring the rabbit to fear and dependence, and it’s need for to see it’s beginnings and meanings in dreams.
Not to mention….I was determined to find a connection between a rabbit…and a shark. :)
Just a bit of serious fun. ;)
The Rabbit and The Shark – A Remembered Tale belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, THE SISTERHOOD, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom! and WMGHow I dread (and long)
for your familiar gaze –
how it haunts me!
I know it as well I know my own fear;
my own nose; my own hollow!
You with your sleek, silver skin reflecting
all the sky’s blue off
of itself,
into my red eyes.
You with your razor-blade teeth,
(how I envy them!)
I loathe them for their whip
like bite.
But most of all
it is your eyes
that drive me to sweat
atop my bed of soft leaves
until my white fur is matted
and smelling
of the most intimate fear.
The fear of parting lovers.
Those empty black bowls,
like pits
into the most glorious hell!
Two ways to find me
before I can scream;
two ways to see me
inside of my dreams;
two ways to mark me
outside of myself –
but O’,
how I love the high upon waking!
I am alive!
Alive to see another day!
Alive to praise the great mother once more!
You, old friend, make me live!
You’ve been with me
long before
my mother’s taught womb –
you of the ocean, and I
of the land,
a dream, a myth, a certainty
that perhaps
we were once
called lovers.
When life on land and ocean
were not mutually exclusive,
and we
of the same ether –
could breath
without
the other.
You are so much a part of me,
that if I were to leave you buried
beneath the graveyard mounds of my mind,
I feel I would perish!
As surely as if
you grew limbs and found me,
as you once did
on the land of my waking dream.
But now is now, and those days –
like your limbs and my gills,
are long gone.
So for now we shall meet in the dark
of my dreams;
where ocean and land come together
to dine –
you on my body, and I
on your soul!
© Kristin Reynolds 5 12 09
erich biemer
i think this is rather delicious…
Kristin Reynolds replied
You really are the king of comment. lol thank you!
Trenchtownrock
I see that the master at one liners Erich as beat me to this read..LOL..I just love his lines..Kristin, i just your style my friend..you are and I mean this with the deepest part of my soul an incredible, talented poetess my friend…..one love.
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes, I saw that! lol
thank you, brother from another mother, what would I do without you? xo
Christie Moses
Damn! :)) ok I do remember this one hehe ;) and I agree with Erich. Thats all i’m sayin oh yes indeedy yum
:)) xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you girly!!! :) xoxo
Gregory John O...
Nice !
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Gregory!!! xo
happyfeet5
My goodness, Kristen. What an imagination. To compare that fearful animal, the rabbit to the killing machine, the shark in a long past time when they co-existed in the ocean as one and in the present fearing it yet loving it as a lover is beyond me. You had me there at t he very edge until the last line. I wonder who won the contest?
Kristin Reynolds replied
lol yes, my mind is a crazy place. lots of laugter and screaming. :)
I’m so glad you liked it, sweet Iris. :) xo
JRGarland
I guess opposites DO attract. The fearless predator of the sea and the fearful prey of the land. LOL Well written.
Kristin Reynolds replied
lol indeed, forever til the end of time, too! :)
Druidstorm
You take my breath away! Your words like the milkyway. This love before the Earth from winds that sing in secrets to the beating heart of dreams! Your wordcraft ROCKS!!!...)o(
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you so much, that means a ton to me!!! xoxox
Cassidy JK (Ra...
The whole poem is incredible but that last stanza packs a wow. xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, my friend. xoxox
raymondoantonio
THE DARK OF YOUR DREAMS IS A WONDERFUL PLACE KRISTIN!!!! XOXO
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks Raymondo!!! sweetheartman. xoxox
Charma Chircop
where ocean and land come together..beautiful verse..excellent poem…Charma
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Charma!!!! xo
Jane17
this is beautiful, words that trigger feelings that many of us bury under snow.. you are an excellent writer, I enjoy your work..
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, Jane so much for that. :) this is the type of poem one either sees through, or doesn’t…thank you for seeing it’s core. xoxo