...and then she saw without seeing and knew without knowing, The Answer:
this is a tanka I wrote to go with the photograph my daughter Ava Skye took of herself the other day…it is posted under ART and on my homepage if you care to check that out, too. :)
she did a darn good job.
...and then she saw without seeing and knew without knowing, The Answer: belongs to the following groups:
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nor still of the moonless night
hear any echoes –
above the weight of the earth
the hollowing coo of doves
© Kristin Reynolds 10 19 09
Christie Moses
The photo is precious and I love this beautiful tanka.
Love you beautiful asskicking lady K xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, dear!!! xoxo
TheWanderingBoo
wonderful image and such beautiful words to compliment it
Kristin Reynolds replied
You are a kind soul, thank you, B. :)
erich biemer
i looove tanka and yours are so…well you know….
Kristin Reynolds replied
This comment holds the very essence of the Japanese forms…clever boy, you. it is in that…you know…where the beauty of the form lay. :)
Tanka and haiku are my favorite forms…sonnets after that.
thanks for knowing. xo
Cassidy JK (Ra...
So beautiful are the words and the photo.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, dear one! xo
Trenchtownrock
Gorgeous writing.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, man. :) xo
Suzanne German
The words go well with this picture – well done!
Kristin Reynolds replied
Awww, thank you for doing that, Suzanne. :) I appriciate that. :) xo
lupa
like Mother like daughter…you both glow, honey…xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks sweet lupa!!!xoxoxo
JRGarland
I thought it was the same tanka as with the photo. Awesome!!
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes, thanks, JR!!! xo
Charma Chircop
beautiful-
just beautiful-CharmaKristin Reynolds replied
thank you, Cahrma!!! xo
marieangel
beautiful and how sweet of suzzane to add the picture x
Kristin Reynolds replied
Yes it was!!!! thanks, Angel! xo
hsien-ku
weight of the earth . . . so sweet to be above it
x
Kristin Reynolds replied
Yes. it is an honor to witness that being. thanks, J. xo
Blanchot
Beauty reflecting beauty: it just doesn’t get much better than that, love. Rusty
Kristin Reynolds replied
nope! it does not. thanks, R xo
chugginrail
lovely write
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, man. :)
veritasunsaid
ah its so awesome to come back to your sweet words:)
brilliant K, my long lost sister
xxxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
Hey, old friend! good to see you. thanks, dear brother. xoxoxo :)