Elevator of Alcoholism

Author: Kristin Reynolds
Word Count: 50
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Elevator of Alcoholism

My dream came true; the seeds took root; the lost rose at last.
This Diminished Hexaverse is dedicated to you.
You know who you are. :)

Elevator of Alcoholism belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Anger Management, Core [C.O.R.E], Everyday Life, Inspired By Life, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, THE SISTERHOOD, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom! and WMG

Ground floor, going up!
Fractured frame stumbling
up the tree of life.
Stature low, you crawl,
(there’s only one way)

you say one thing,
and then you say
another thing –
going nowhere…

I pick you
up and throw
seeds to wind,

praying
that you’ll

rise.

Brendan Schoon

WOW, wonderful words! Excellent!
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, Brendan. :)
erich biemer

quite inspirational…..
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you so much, Erich! xo
Skypilot

Hell yeah! exellent!
Kristin Reynolds replied

Glad you like this, very glad you took these words to heart, in some form or another; that little guy was always listening, even if he was bound and gagged.
You’ve gotta love spring. :)
Christie Moses

“arise fair sun and kill the envious moon” :)) I don’t know why that line came to mind but it did LOL
Seriously, this is just beautiful K ;) xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied

YES! I can always do with a Shakespeare quote, thank you fair maiden.
thanks, love. xoxo
Dwayne Boyd

Sometimes things do work out.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Yes, no matter how long or arduous the road, sometimes it actually takes you where you want to be, not just where it goes. thank you! xo
Andrew Bailey

Tell it like it is, my lady K xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied

Will always do that, my dear, always – count on it! xo
Mark Ramstead

You clearly have super powers and supreme patience. He was lucky to have you care enough to help.
Kristin Reynolds replied

super powers: YES. lol
Supreme patience: I have 5 kids…how else would I still be alive to tell any tales. :)
I hope he feels himself lucky now..because before? During those days? He felt nothing but his own beast ripping his flesh to ribbons and screaming hate at those he loved most. a terrible truth alcoholism, terrible.
thanks, Mark.
he’s stopped drinkng now…that makes it all worht it for me. honestly, it really does. :)
why else are we here but to gain strength, learn and overcome?
autumnwind

wow powerful awesome. speechless, as so often your writing renders me. xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you dear! xoxoxo
JRGarland

It is a wonderful thing seeing a self destructive person change their habits to secure a healthy lifestyle. A vey powerfully written piece indeed. Well done.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Yes it is, there are no words for it! a gift for so many, especially themselves.
thanks, dear. xo
Trenchtownrock

This is kick ass..you know how to drop knowledge with words love..this is just magnificent…I logged on to the other place and saw your big win..congrats.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks, Chris. :)
\and thank you for sending me over there – I had no idea! lolol my old email addie is long gone, so I never knew! WOW! I am floored! I hope they get back to me, as I have since forgotten my log on info. lol
Thank you, that made my day! woohooo!!!!
Shoaib .

speechlessness-ness
:)
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks, boi. I love your words, but your non-speech is also very telling. lolol xoxox
hsien-ku

the worm of alcoholism . . . i suppose there are successes though i have not seen them…
Kristin Reynolds replied

There are, trust me. I hope the best stays far from the man, as he, as you may know, has really really blown up into blossoms more brilliant than I ever imagined.
:)
Shaun Green

Liked this. Succinct and powerful. The separation of the word “rise” – a nice bit of syntax emphasizing the sense of both loneliness and hope, as well as seeming like a command.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, Shaun. :)
Cassidy JK (Ra...

So well said.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks again, Cassidy. :)
Blanchot

You simply glow with inner beauty and compassion. You are amazing, lady! Love, ME
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks, R, what to say, but thank you. :)
love, Me too. xo