Jealousy: Devil in a Green Dress with Matching Stilettos
I wrote this a while back while indulging in the devil’s gift of green.
I posted this now as Raymondo reminded me yesterday how horrible a beast jealousy can be; and how deadly.
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on some days,
does it feel like the devil himself
just bought me
a thigh high,
tight as a second skin
kelly-green dress
with matching green stilettos?
It feels damn good
to strut
on those green days.
I know its wrong,
this indulgence in such gifts,
so why do I lick the monster
until he is on his back
staring at me
with those greedy black eyes,
when he only means to strip me
naked
like a cheap whore
at the end
of a long filthy night;
burning my haughty face
red?
© Kristin Reynolds 8 11 09
Christie Moses
OMG!!!!!!!!! Seriously, this is friggin awesome K. Who else could describe it so perfectly in its monstrosity. Yeah, jealously is the worst feeling and DAMN this is brilliant. A fave a thousand times over xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
lol glad you likey, C. :) xoxox
3XEternity
This is wow :)
Kristin Reynolds replied
wow is good! :) thank you!
Dwayne Boyd
Right on Kristin!
Kristin Reynolds replied
cheers, man, thank you!
p.s-I have not forgotten about your phish piece…i’ll get to it, i promise. :)
lianne
Wow – Kristin this is an almost deadly accurate description of an emotion that eats at so many of us – mostly out of our own insecurity rather than possessiveness. Not being able to love ourselves very well, we are sure our love can’t love us either and that there are others out their much more suited to meet their needs. Then for sure the monster rears its head. I doubt there is anyone who reads this who will not relate to this! Brilliantly written.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, Lianne. sadly, most can relate. :) xo
Matt Roberts
Interesting… very interesting indeed.
Kristin Reynolds replied
glad you liked it, Matt. :)
bluewhite
Powerful
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thankyou, L!
erich biemer
quite some punch in this poem…..nice…
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, Erich! those dark emotions do punch the hardest.
...Charma... ....
Jealousy is a green moster..one of the worst sins destructing loveand happiness..this is strong and deep.. jealousy from another part can make us feel chained and trapped,used like the whore in your poem,jealousy destroys happy smiles-
excellent my friend-CharmaKristin Reynolds replied
yes indeed, to all you said. it’s a real bitch. :)
thanks, lady. xo
hsien-ku
i have one of those dresses too. so tight they break your bones. squeeze all the breath out of you. soften your organs. make you blind so you don’t have to watch while the moon eats you. better give that dress to charity – a lunatic will buy it, wear it until she has been sucked dry. better for you to buy leather for new shoes instead. don’t you agree?
Kristin Reynolds replied
I love your comments. yes, like a big green snake eating you from the head, while the moon shines on, teeth bared, licking her dark lips…until you are shat bones on soil.
perhaps we can go to goodwill together, and donate our filthy green threads to the needy…then walk on over to the shoe store and buy us some strong, leather soled treads for the long, tretcherous walk ahead.
is it a date, then?
:)
thanks, HK
lupa
awesome imagery here,My Lady K….I hate that dress, loathe those shoes….xoxox
Kristin Reynolds replied
me too, girl. time to burn ‘em, I think. make a ceremony out of it. sound good? :)
-Lilith-
Oh yes! :-)))
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, lilith. :)
veritasunsaid
But green is to freeking hot!!!
for a few months i was simply known as ‘The kid in the green jacket’ haha
but brilliant writing, you have captured the emotions so perfectly!! (AGAIN haha)
xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes, it is, too. Being a green-eyed dirty blonde girl, I know it looks good on me, but damn does it hurt!
thanks boy. :) xo
JRGarland
This is so well written. Everytime I see that bonehead start to rise up I place a fork in his cheeky little butt and send him home crying to his mother. LOL That is one emotion that will never rule my life. Well done.
Kristin Reynolds replied
ha! yes. you have inspired me to keep a fork with me at all times, for just that purpose, thank you again for saving me! :) xo
Mark Ramstead
Why jealousy? It kicks in and we end up kicked in the face… was it always like this? Is protecting our genetic spawn worth the emotional roller coster?
Kristin Reynolds replied
I have no idea, Mark. all I know is I hate that bitch.
:)
raymondoantonio
YES THE DEVIL IS GREEN WITH ENVY, BUT YOU ARE WISE TO HIS BULLSHIT!!! BELLISSIMO KRISTIN!! XO
Kristin Reynolds replied
indeed! thanks, man! xoxox
Trenchtownrock
Yes my friend, the jealously sword can slay the best of them…well written art Kristin..you keep on slaying them with your poetry skills..hell I am jealous…LOL
Kristin Reynolds replied
no no no, man, no jealousy needed, you smartypants. lol
ya gotta love a smartass. well..I do anyway. xo
Rhenastarr
Absolutely AWESOME!!!!
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, Rhena!!!xoxo
ArcadiaTempest
What a brilliant analogy of the green eyed creature….especially when we are astutely aware we have him riding us with his whip urging us to go deeper into the swamp…and when we do we find we have lost so much of our reasoning to fine our way back to solid ground (emotions) We are a funny bunch us humans are we not! But we gotta love ourselves cos we ain’t perfect but we kinda know that….XX
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes, a funny bunch to be sure…I know, one can really get lost in the mire of this emotion, your comments are always so insightful, thanks, KS! brilliant woman, you! xo
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Jealousy is so alluring at times that we can’t fight him off….so long as we only partake for a moment and then come to our senses, ‘tis ok methinks. Your poetry rocks, sings, screams…plays every damned instrument in the band. xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
wow! Thank you, dear one, for that! every instrament in the band, eh? even the cowbell? MORE COWBELL!
lol
thanks, my dear. xoxo
autumnwind
wow. this is completely amazing. awesome powerful work here. a lesson most of anyway, learn early on. xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, lady S. always, for the love.
xoxoxo
Blanchot
FUCKING BRILLIANT, MY LOVE. WOW! YOU BLOW MY MIND!
Kristin Reynolds replied
so glad I blow your mind, and I’ll take that fucking brilliant all day long. :)
thanks, babe.
xoxoxo
JohnRobbins
A powerful write indeed.
A great flow to this work that doesnt lag at any point
really this is great writting.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you so much, John! :)
Shoaib .
hmmmmmm yah i feel ya on this one, thats why i wrote jealousy in the sanctuary of sleep
we like on the same page kiddo
you def put the feminine touch on this though
my jealousy wouldnt be caught dead in silettos LMAOOOOOOOOOO
Kristin Reynolds replied
ha! yeah, yours would be better left to flip-flops and a lime-green Borat full body thong…would you not agree?
ha! lol
thanks, love! xo
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Kristin Reynolds replied
YOU…ARE…THE…BEST! Thank you dear one. mwah’s all day long! xoxoxo
bluewhite
YES! DESERVES THIS FEATURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you so much, Lin!!! xo