A Dream To End All Dreams --Italian sonnet
a dreamy dreamer’s, 8 syl italian sonnet.
Another one for the dreamers
and intergalactic humans.
you know who you are.:)
A Dream To End All Dreams --Italian sonnet belongs to the following groups:
# 1 ARTISTS OF REDBUBBLE , ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Sci Fi , The beauty of poetry, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom! and WMGA clear blue light precedes her trance
where she’s reborn amid her dreams,
while floating up, her mind a stream;
her wraithlike gown in skyward dance.
The dying stars and black-holes pass
her swimming form – she’s ripping seams
in light, where she is found and deemed
a ghost upon the night ship’s mast…
The universe breathes one last breath
into the notion of her mind,
where waking is a matter not
received by hopelessness or death;
as clear blue light returns, it finds
the lady that her dreams forgot…
© Kristin Reynolds 2008
Trenchtownrock
I read this piece a couple of times just to be able to absorb the beauty…it is very dreamlike…I was transported into another time and place…such beauty reside in your words..the second verse is gorgeous..you know how to live amongst the heavens and feel the spirit of the poetry gods living in your mind…beautiful work k-dog..k shizzles..dizzle…one love.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, dear heart. :)
lovin all the izzles. lol xo
Lisa Jewell
Inside her world of dreams
She is truly free.
How beautiful you are
So lovely are the thoughts and feelings you paint for us all.
Simply stunning. xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
yup! Where would we be without that safe haven of possibility.
thank you, Lisa, glad you liked. :)
I love your comments. :)
xo
lianne
Exquisitely crafted Kristin – and so very beautiful. Your words take us into dreamland where all things are possible. Just so rich with imagery that is soft and gentle, one could read it like a lullaby.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you again, Lianne. :) xo
raymondoantonio
PERFECTION IN EVERY LINE!!! A GEM!!! YOU ARE A STAR KRISTIN!!! XO
Kristin Reynolds replied
You’re the bestest, R! thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxox
Christie Moses
Ray is right ;) you are a star. I already said you are the queen of sonnets and that includes Italian sonnets. This so dreamy and smooth. Floating and transporting me. Brilliant, lovely lady xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
:)
You are the bomb-diggidy, lady; thank you so. xoxox
erich biemer
well traveled…..
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes, I always keep my ethereal walking shoes in my pocket, just incase. :) xox
travelling is a must.
erika15
I found myself caught up in these words, I was transported for at least just a moment…. Thank you for writing and sharing this K. xxxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
so glad, E. :) thank you for reading, girly. :) xo
JRGarland
I love how you allow the reader to journey into your world of dreams. I love your ghost like figure upon my night ship’s mast, ever watchful. Tis a dream worthy of heaven. Well done.
Kristin Reynolds replied
me, too. :)
dreams worthy of heaven are the cat’s meow, indeed.
thanks, JR, my friend. xoxo
autumnwind
OMG those last two lines especially…sigh. Kristin, you are such magic. hugs for sharing all that you do, and all that you are . xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
lol thank you, Shar. I hope today finds you with a smile, lady S. xoxo
webbie
Kristin Reynolds replied
Wow! Cool! I’m so honored, thank you all so much!
yay!!!
love, K xoxo
John Orr
Beautifully compsed.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, John! :)
David Silsbury
Nice, many congratulations on being featured.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, David! :)