Paradise Found
just a little feel good Tanka. :)
God bless the dreamers…
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wrapped gently around warm sand,
palm trees whisper, come,
as I dip my toes into
the vast ocean of my dreams…
© Kristin Reynolds 2008
erich biemer
and you dream it so well…
namaste
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, erich. :)
sandra22
Lovely…sigh, Kristin
sandra x
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Sandra. :)
raymondoantonio
BELLISSIMMO!! SUCH A WONDERFUL DREAM KRISTIN!!!! XO
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you Raymondo!!! xo
Matt Roberts
Nice :)
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, man. :)
JRGarland
I like the way you think. Dream a thousand dreams. Great Tanka.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Will do, JR. thank you. xo:)
Lisa Jewell
Paradise is found
Lapping from your beautiful ocean heart.
xx
Kristin Reynolds replied
:)
You are too kind, thank you, Lisa. :) xo
Christie Moses
oh this is so delicious and dreamy. :) A utopia of discovery and dreams. Love you fellow lady ass-kicker lol :)) XOXO
Kristin Reynolds replied
love you too, storm O’mine! :) lol xoxox mwah!
Trenchtownrock
Gots to love the dreamers…I just wrote about love and dreaming tonight..hell I am always up in the clouds and sometimes I can’t find my way home..LOL
Kristin Reynolds replied
indeedy-do! lol
I will meet you there, as I have been living in the clouds for as long as I can remember. :) xo
love ya, homes. K xo
Skypilot
Such a lovely picture… such a beautiful dream
Yes…caspian at anchor, a little spearfishing for breakfast…
You know the rest…you always do xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes it is. I know all too well about Caspian and the rest.
:) dreams can come true. xo
autumnwind
so inviting to dream with you. tempting imagery, you amazing poetess. xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes it is, girlfriend. thanks, lady Shar. :) xo
Rex Inkpen
lovely warm glow to this deceptively simple piece.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you so much, Rex. :) xo
Mark Ramstead
Isn’t it strange that we instinctively let go on a desert island? Why is that?
Kristin Reynolds replied
not strange at all, really. I think that is a primordial dream, imbedding in our subconcious from back in the day. it is the ultimate dream. :)
who wouldn’t want peace, quiet and nobody but those you love around? now to mention…no more waiting in line, for anything! lol
Rhenastarr
Simply wonderful.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Rhena. :) xo
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Omg I’m so impressed. LOL. Gorgeous poem, perfect Tanka (I counted…sorry hahaha). You never cease to amaze me. Xoxo. Look out Utah!
Kristin Reynolds replied
don’t be sorry, mo-fo. lol I would expect nothing less from your smart ass.
I am pretty fucking amazing. lol
Utah better strap down, cause here we come, yo!
Vasile Stan
From the tip of your toes
to the bottom of this ocean
you’re a dream inside
your dream
Well K, this Tanka was definitely inspirational for me…
Kristin Reynolds replied
you are so sweet, hun. Thank you again for your love, light and kind inspiration. :) xoxox
Charma Chircop
another gem-a favs—Charma
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, pretty lady. :) xo
linaji
I just flew here From Vasiles work coming from this inspired verse.. for you I say too… Wow!! Sista..you just IT! XXX
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you sweet, Lina!!! xoxoxo
JaneSolomon
“the vast ocean of my dreams” this is beautiful, I love this Kristin! xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks, Jane. :) xo
ArcadiaTempest
Beautiful dreamer you are!! I notice the sweetness of joy in the last few writes of yours….it makes one smile when your pen as this kind of ink running in it…XX
Kristin Reynolds replied
Yes, I’m not all dark brooding…lol…I seem to go in phases of light/dark.
thank you, hun. :) xo
Anne McGinn
what a lovely and sensual piece of writing…
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Anne. :) xo the ocean is a very sensual beauty for sure. xo
happyfeet5
This is absolutely beautiful. Your mind is a pradise full of an ocean of words and tropical palm trees. Ahhhhh. Lovely. Iris
Kristin Reynolds replied
aww, thank you, Iris, you are the sweetest thing. :) xoxo
gemini63
You describe it so well I take myself off to this place too it is such a lovely place :))
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes it is! xox thank you!
lianne
Breathtaking and gentle poem that carries me away into the softness of this dream. Truly lovely Kristin.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, Lianne. :) xo
PapasGirl
dreamers know real beauty
Kristin Reynolds replied
Yes they do. :) thank you so much, fellow dreamer. :)
marieangel
you did again ! a beautx
Kristin Reynolds replied
:) lol thanks, Angel! xo
Blanchot
You are the only dream! I do love you so! Me
Kristin Reynolds replied
I love you, too. :)
the only dream worth living remember?
xoxox
Coronus
Delicious!
Danceintherain
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you so much! :)
RebeccaWeston
Congratulations on your well deserved feature in Inspired by Life
Becca