Beyond: The Song of Something Good
a cinquain of finding happiness beyond the falling rain.
Beyond: The Song of Something Good belongs to the following groups:
"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Everyday Life, Light In The Darkness, Love Bullets, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, The Red Writing Room, Up & Coming Writers, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom! and WMGSoftly
bright bluebirds fall
behind the lids of rain;
masking the waking dreams of pain
with song.
© Kristin Reynolds 9 2009
James Watson
Beauty in sorrow and complex simplicity
Kristin Reynolds replied
wow, I like that comment. beautiful, James. :) thank you. xo
Christie Moses
This is like a big giant hug. How very beautiful, my sweet friend :) Perfectly stated and definetly needed this morning. Love you xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
YAY! that’s cool. I’m so happy to have hugged a friend today with words; that is my favorite. :)
love ya, girly. K xo
lupa
masking the waking dreams of pain with song….....you know what your words mean to me!!! xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
I’m so glad, Lupa. thank you xoxoxoxo
raymondoantonio
THE MUSES ARE REALLY HAMMERING THE INSPIRATION INTO YOUR SOUL!! OH !!THE POWER OF WORDS!!!! X
Kristin Reynolds replied
sheesh, Ray…what’s the deal with all this hammering business today! Damn, boy! lol kidding, kidding, thank you, my dear, Raymondo, the power of words, indeed! xox
autumnwind
Kristin, you are deeply inspiring. Love and joy to you, always. xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, shar!!!!! I love you, lovely, K xoxox
lianne
One always hopes that the song is strong enough and loud enough to do just that – drown out the dreams of pain. A perfect jewel of a piece this morning, Kristin.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thank you, Lianne. :) xo
Normaje
You and your words are beautiful…....Love it and what you do…..
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you so much, sweet lady! You are so kind, what a great comment. :) xoxoxo Kristin
Gregory John O...
Nice
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, Greg! love, K xo
anaisnais
I sense the whole cycle of life itself within this one…how it dies away seasonally and then come spring new birth….wonderfully penned as usual, well done! Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Anna!!! love, K xox
Trenchtownrock
This is a write that I can use to wrap my emotions in when those days roll around…they come at least once a week…thanks for the beauty.
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes they do, and thanks alot, Chris, love, K xo
JRGarland
May happiness follow you always. Great write.
Kristin Reynolds replied
...and you, as well, dear. :) love, K xox
hsien-ku
st francis thought birds were the intermediaries between humans and angels. i have found nothing to contradict that view. your writing is like daumal’s pearl – rare and necessary.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Yes. :)
After my mother passed, a white dove came to my grandmother’s apartment windowsil (my mothers, mother) and simply would not go. it just sat there looking into the window for hours right after she’d passed. I’ll never forget that.
Thank you, my dear for the_rare and necessary_…coming from you, that is a great gift, thank you. x
ArcadiaTempest
A falling rain of bluebirds…..that is the image I saw. It was ambiguous though as it was like a gift that required one to run and tumble and catch the bluebirds incase they fell too hard to the earth…. It is not good enough perhaps to see the bluebird of happiness….we need to move our butt and catch …one at least if we can…. XXX
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, KarenSue, I agree…one must move ones butt a bit out of the muck, in order to see the clear of sun. :) lol xoxo
butchart
we all find comfort when and where we can… this says it so beauitfully….... nothing wasted…......b
Kristin Reynolds replied
ha! I left almost this exact comment on Andrew Bailey’s latest poem…wow. indeed, we do. great mind, my friend. :)
thanks, Butch xo
Alan Dean
“behind the lids of rain” – it all turns on this … great read
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks, Alan. :)