Clouds
a Japanese Tanka. :)
Clouds belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Light In The Darkness, Love Bullets, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day ), The beauty of poetry, The Red Writing Room, Up & Coming Writers and WMGWhite petals pirouette
about my twirling frame;
a blue heron flies
towards his existence –
we meet within clouds
© Kristin Reynolds 2008
Shoaib .
:) money
Kristin Reynolds replied
Bank. hells, yeah! :) thanks, man, K-grrrrl! xo
lianne
Perfection Kristin – every word you write is sheer perfection!
Kristin Reynolds replied
Lianne…you are, once again, waaaay too kind. But thank you. :) my canadian roots make me humble…I can’t help it. compliments hurt many times. lol love love love you! xo
raymondoantonio
575 ..77… YOU ARE AMAZING!! BEAUTIFUL TANKA!!! X
Kristin Reynolds replied
so are you, amazing man!!! mwah! K xo
butchart
danka for the tanka… it was sublime….....b
Kristin Reynolds replied
no sweat, well met. :) lol sorry…that was not a very good comeback, now was it! lol
cheers, K xo
Christie Moses
This is gorgeous K :) Makes me feel so light and happy :) love ya xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
soo happy you liked it, C-girl, xoxoxo
veritasunsaid
Damn girl…your making the rest of us look bad…but feel reeeallllyy good:)
beautiful writing K
xx
Kristin Reynolds replied
Wow, not many here can be made to look bad; the talent here is staggering…but…I’ll own the makes ya feel good, part. you da bomb, my man. :) peace, K xo
JRGarland
I love the image you produce here. The freedom is expressed beautifully.
Kristin Reynolds replied
That means alot, JR, thanks, hun. :) love, K xo
Trenchtownrock
Simply beautiful.
Kristin Reynolds replied
like you. :) xo
skinnyman
mmmmmmm nice feeling here xx
Kristin Reynolds replied
I’m so happy it made you feel good, Peter. :) hope you’re well. love, K xo
erika15
This is just too damn good ;D XXXX
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks again, hun, for all of your love and kindness, you really are sweet as honey. :) love, K xo
skinnyman
fair to middling as we brits say.. I think that means ok. you sound well :))) x
Kristin Reynolds replied
cool. :) and yes, for the most part I’m very well, thanks man. :) glad you’re fair to middling. ;) cool.
lianne
Canadian roots? Ditto – lol – I knew there was a connection somewhere!!
Kristin Reynolds replied
HA! no way! I only moved to the US for marraige, I’m a born and bred Winnipeger!!! where are you from, my fellow canuck? ;) cool, small world.
bill bell
This was sweet K-bird, love it when you go short ;)
Kristin Reynolds replied
K-bird, I like it.:) Thanks, Bill. xo
lianne
Born but not raised in Timmins, Ontario – high school in Quebec – near Montreal. But I’ve been here in the states for many years now. Still call Canada home though and never gave up my citizenship.
Kristin Reynolds replied
cool! Me, too…i’m never ever giving up my citizenship. :)
TeriLee
Wonderfully done :)
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you so much, Terilee. :)
RosaCobos
Perfect moment.
A piece of Haiku…
bit longer..but juicy…really juicy.
Rosa (I am not longer moderating the Nirvana writing section. But this does not mean that I will not visit my favourite writers… keep on rocking!! and have a hug)
Kristin Reynolds replied
Yes, indeed. thank you, sweet lady. :)
Vasile Stan
Twirling frame... a Sufi way of connectivity with the higher… not a mere co-incidence to cross paths… synchronicity and resonance are other names for God’s intersecting attributes imparted with love across time and space into us.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Man…I have found you. :) I would expect no less, from this vortex that is redbubble, putting others who see/know/are… before me. brilliant. So happy you found me. :)
Are you a Gurdjieff man, perhaps?
No. I do not belive in coincidence in any regard. never have. it all IS. your explanation of it is perfect. I really respect your comment here, as you see through to the heart of it – a heart that is hard to catch, and harder still to hang on to…but when seen, can never be let go of. :) love. Kristin