I Write What Comes
just another poem (in diminished hexaverse form) on writing; and how I do not choose what I write… I simply write what comes.
I Write What Comes belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Light In The Darkness, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day ), The beauty of poetry, The Red Writing Room, Up & Coming Writers and WMGI write what blows forth
with the heaving wind;
through the trees that speak –
from the open fields
off the vast blue sea…
I write the clouds
and the sun’s rays;
of the dying stars
and each black hole –
I write what
universe
bids me write.
These words
are their
voice.
© Kristin Reynolds 2008
raymondoantonio
A COUNTDOWN OF POETIC POWER AND FLOW!! A HEXAVERSE!! I HAVE LEARNED SOMETHING NEW!!! YOU ARE POETESS AND TEACHER AND SO MUCH MORE!! RESPECT!! XO
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks honey, bun. :) you are too kind. xoxoxo MWAH!
raymondoantonio
NOT JUST ANOTHER POEM!!! X
Kristin Reynolds replied
xoxox :) you’re the best.
James Watson
Write on.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Cheers, James. :) xo
Philosophy Lee
Kristin… I don’t see the stars as ‘dying’.
Eternal Living Love Consciousness…
All that is, and death just isn’t possible.
Infinite ways to ‘see’... let’s choose the best! (or let ‘IT’ choose us)
A great piece of writintg here, personifying nature.
I Love it! :)
Kristin Reynolds replied
lee…there has to be death in order for rebirth. even stars die/transform/become a higher form of themselves. you’re taking the word Dying too literally here. :) there can be no death for a true star, the only death comes as hell…as law…as rock…to live as rock, IMO, is the epitome of living”death”. :)
lianne
If this is what comes, Kristin – then if it please the universe, keep it coming. I think this is true of everyone who considers himself/herself a poet though few express it as movingly as you do.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks so much, hun. xoxox :)
linaji
I am not only enjoying the verse.. but the response.. I shall return for that too!! you are writing your Winds Soul!! tis beauty!!
Kristin Reynolds replied
oh, boy! cool…I love hearing your thoughts, girl. ;) thank you!!! xo love, K
TaniaLosada
so beautiful…
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you so much! :)
Christie Moses
yes indeedy. When you force it it just ends up crap LOL This is just beautiful K :) Let it come and write what the muse bids you too :) xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
indeed. lol love ya, girl…xo
Teacup
Beautiful. It seems to just flow, as you have said, when we dont try and force it. Just let it be. x
Kristin Reynolds replied
yes indeedy, it surely does just that, thank you!!! love, K xo
Nascha
Beautiful Kristin….never forced….you are indeed an exceptional poet! xxxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
wow, thank you so very much, Jane, you are a doll. :) xo
happyfeet5
I hear ya Kristen. You speak what you write and you write about the universe. That is you are. Iris. Powerful, the universe!!! Came back from a forced vacation. P.C. problems.
xoxo Iris
Kristin Reynolds replied
Eek. hate those forced vacay’s, sorry bout that dear, glad you’re back! xoxo
JRGarland
Much of my writing is like that. I would have a general theme to write about and then the words come as I write it out. I instinctively know when the poem is finished and just stop. Excellent writing K.
Kristin Reynolds replied
me, too, me, too. it’s just like that. :) thanks, friend, love, K xo
Trenchtownrock
Sweetly said and I feel the same way about my writing..won’t post everything that comes to my crazy ass mind but will write them down and the words are their voices…
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks again, chris, you are awesome. xoxo :)
bluewhite
“I write what universe bids me write.” THAT is poetry. That is inspiration—breathing in and then out.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Wow, I am humbled by that comment, thank you so much for that. :) ahhhh. thanks again, K xo
Erika .
Oh Kristin..this is so magical. It gives me the feeling that poetry just is....xxx
Kristin Reynolds replied
YAY! LOVE that! Poetry to me, and I’m certain to you as well, IS magic. pure. and yes, indeed. Poetry IS. :) ya gotta love it. thanks, girly, K xoxo
MarkezzAckui ...
gorgeous writing…you are an artist by far!
Kristin Reynolds replied
Aww, thank you so much, Markezz, you are very sweet., :) co
hsien-ku
the simple truth rendered beautiful by a poets pen.
you are what st francis called a channel of god’s peace. from one point of view, just a transcriber, but from another point of view, blessed.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Wow, to say thank you would sound like trash blowing in the wind…coming from you, this comment means so much. :)
love, and many thanks, Kristin :)