One is All it Takes

That is so true my friend..one simple act of kindness can add years to your life and help someone forget about tomorrow’s heartache…sweetly done.

Before I even read this I must say something about your description because it’s eerily inexplicable. But ALL day yesterday and when I woke during the night (horrendously early and unable to sleep again) the concept of the fibonacci sequence kept running through my head – just the word, sometimes – over and over. How odd that such an unusual word would occur to us both – not that I didn’t already feel that we are often on the same wavelength.

Now about this incredible poem – even Fibonacci himself would be positively stunned by the beautiful use to which you have put his concept. You are truly remarkably gifted to be able to express in a disciplined form like this, a concept as all encompassing as you have done here. This flows divinely from ONE to end, making your case in this beautiful rhythm. Superb, Kristin.

There is so much truth in this. It just takes the right kind hand and what is frozen can be melted. Very beautiful writing K :) I love the happiness pouring from this one. It makes me hope for fairy tales :) xoxox

I will testify to this.
So perfectly put.
So desperately needed by so many.

Such important truth beautifully expressed. Sometimes I think this is my favorite form of poetry. So eloquent each verse, so powerful. Amazing. xoxoxo

Super Love quotient..and loved Lliannes comment! Peaceful kindness.. small effort.. really wonderful thinking and heartfelt writing.

So true and so eloquently written. Love your expressions. Well done.

love your use of forms/the application of other concepts into forms…while it may seem archaic to some i have always believed that as a matter of craft; it’s important to know/understand the historical forms/movements of whatever creative work one pursues i.e. without knowing ones history one is doomed to repeat it….that knowledge can also give one freedom for example many of the greatest jazz musicians are/were also great classical musicians….and i’m done rambling…lol…
namaste

Oh…I guess… for the pattern that the words are forming in the writing of the poem and “fibonacii” is this same pattern…is that so?
I love to read it this way.
You get the concept of the one… ungrained …(is there exist this word in English?)...and at the same time it gives me a sort of insecurity feeling, because the “one” seems a dooming concept like excluding all the others.. unabling us to choose. On the other hand your poem can be extended to all the multi-manifestations of the same Life… so we would never end this fibonacci…sometimes it should be divided…. and go multiplying the essence of itself.
Rosa (Lovely… intense and interesting to the utmost, Kristin)

This touched my heart. It is so true. Beautiful writing.

WONDERFUL KRISTIN THE FIBONACCI IS A STRUCTURE THAT HAS SUCH POETIC POTENTIAL!!! BEAUTIFUL SENTIMENTS!! X

Well done K, as always, well done :)

Very well said. Thanks for the affirmation & right back to YOU!

So little can be so much, of course timing and aiming of the “act” remains the more human part of this equasion, even a little wink can make my day… ; )