On Swallowing Sun

Author: Kristin Reynolds
Word Count: 31
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On Swallowing Sun

I’m feeling sunshine today. :) This is a Fibonacci Form poem, about living life to the fullest! and Going for your dreams…and overcoming all obstacles…

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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Light In The Darkness, Love Bullets, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day ), The Art of Pain, The beauty of poetry, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

Grab
A hold
Of the sun –
Ride it towards death;
Swallow its essence and become
The reason you are reborn, amid lifetimes of clouds…

Blanchot

I am certainly glad that you are feeling sunshine today; that is always nice to hear. Love the poem, love the central thesis here. Love, RBG
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thank you, thanks my man! love, K X
raymondoantonio

MAGIC!!! BELLISSIMO!! X
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks Raymondo! love your bellisimo’s! :)
veritasunsaid

i needed this one:) i love it =) thankyou
Kristin Reynolds replied

Hey, twin, glad to hear it. that’s what twins are for, right? lol
JRGarland

Great write. I can see myself grabbing the sun and riding towards death. Going for the gusto of life. Masterfully done K.
Kristin Reynolds replied

Good for you, JR! happy to hear it! love, K X
happyfeet5

I could feel the sun inside of me. Yes, Swallow it whole. I took a deep breath and decided to do that just now. Can’t always have this feeling of doom in you. Love this one. Iris
Kristin Reynolds replied

YAY! then my job is done, thanks, Iris; you are so kind. :) love, Kristin :)
linaji

Holy Cow your wonderful!!
Kristin Reynolds replied

Holy crow, so are you! lol love ya, L-girl! K x
Scott d'Almeida

wonderful words
Kristin Reynolds replied

why, thanks you, Scott. :) love, K
skinnyman

yee har, go girl :))) x
Kristin Reynolds replied

thanks, Peter! love, K x
Sally Omar

PURE MAGIC!!!!!!!!!!!! xxooxxo
Kristin Reynolds replied

thank you, Sally!!! love, K x
Erika .

how inspiring is this?! I LOVE IT! :D XXXX
Kristin Reynolds replied

Glad you liked! :) love, K x
RosaCobos

I did….
and my heart smoked..
rains.
Rosa (Love your minimal poem..almost a haiku….almost a sigh.. beautiful)
Kristin Reynolds replied

Thanks for this wonderful comment, smoking, love it! :) where there’s smoke, there’s fine, and fire is good! :) love, K x
rubyjo

damn girl! (just had to say that lol)
words of wisdom
Kristin Reynolds replied

thanks, RJ! you my soul-sista! high-five for being in the hospital room together, where else would i be? :) healing comes, my dear. know it! X
Christie Moses

Wish I could swallow the sun :)
Kristin Reynolds replied

Honey, look at you, you could light up a room; you already have, love. :) xxx
Shoaib .

giddy up apollo :)
Kristin Reynolds replied

LOL, indeed! That’s a ride worth taking for sure. lol thanks, you, love, K
bill bell

love this form gonna check it out, way to go K.
Kristin Reynolds replied

thank you, Bill!
lawrie .

I always like to grab hold and ride like the wind, tis the only way to go(((((((wink)))))))) Lovit K, a very good adage to live by…..xoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied

thanks, my psychic friend. :) love, K