Stargazer
This is a tanka (Japanese style of poetry) I wrote last year; it is one of my favorites, as I am a HUGE huge stargazer. LOVE it. :)
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# 1 ARTISTS OF REDBUBBLE , ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Insomniacs and Other Night Crawlers, Light In The Darkness, Love Bullets, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The beauty of poetry, Up & Coming Writers and WMGthe night is all mine.
i lay in lush, dew soaked grass -
hands for a pillow -
my earthbound home forgotten
as I hitch a ride with stars…
© Kristin Reynolds 2008
raymondoantonio
A GEM!
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks again, R. you rock! Love, K
sandraellen
A beautiful visual.
I could ‘see’ every line.
sandra… fellow stargazer, stardreamer xx
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks again, Sandra. there really is nothing like that in the world, getting lost in the night sky…love that: stardreamer…exactly. :) love, Kristin X
JenniferB
I love the journeys your poetry takes me on. :)
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks, dear girl, your art is quite a journey to behold, as well. ;) ove, K
DarKarsean
what a great ride…Tony
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, Tony! love, Kristin
TheWanderingBoo
beautiful
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, Boo! :)
lupa
this is lovely,K…..you got me from the first line
Kristin Reynolds replied
Aww, thanks, Lupa. :)
Reynaldo
love your poetry x
Kristin Reynolds replied
You are a king amongst men, thank you! ;)
JRGarland
Ahhh to sleep and dream. Well done.
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks again, JR. you are a sweetheart…:)
veritasunsaid
my goodness; im becoming addicted to your work!!
another very impressive piece:)
Kristin Reynolds replied
You rock! thank you so much, that is so cool. :)
linaji
This just takes me right there Kristen.. right where my hands behind my head.. I fly.. beautiful work!!
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thanks, hun :) it’s my faveorite place to be when alone…or, he-hem…with company. :)
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Can I come with you?
Kristin Reynolds replied
sure thing, huney, come on! :)
erika15
ah yes….i know this well. love how you have written this K! xx
Kristin Reynolds replied
thanks, girl. :)
oneperfectkiss
Gorgeous…I adore this!! X
Kristin Reynolds replied
Thank you, sweet lady! love, K
skinnyman
a stellar lol piece :)
Kristin Reynolds replied
lol yup, I would have said the same. once a comedian, always! lol K
JasmineLove
Beautiful…simply beautiful!!! Jasmine xo
Kristin Reynolds replied
Aww, thanks, J, i appriciate that. :) love, K
happyfeet5
This is beautiful. It is short yet makes me feel like lying down under the stars and going straight to dreamland.
Kristin Reynolds replied
Ahhh, me too, sister, me too. :)
autumnwind
I remember this – how could I not? Magic in words that transports us to where you are, as we pretend to hitch that ride with you. BRILLIANT BEAUTY!!!! xoxoxo
Kristin Reynolds replied
You always find a way to make me blush. you are way too sweet, S, but man, do i love it! lol love, you, K X