The Son of the African Sun

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Author: happyfeet5
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The Son of the African Sun


This poem was inspired by a fellow bubbler’s heart and soul and I was given permission from him to use his poems and a journal about his life to get his essence together and to put it into a storytelling poem.  Some parts are part of my imagination, others a part of his and other parts are true to what he is and what made him what he is today. I hope he likes it…..........Well, I posted this yesterday and today he read it. He liked it. So, now I feel free to say that his name is Jonathan Carrick, jono, Raven Ice. Upon reading it pepper08 was inspired to make this beautiful image for the poem. Thank you Pepper. To appreciate the larger view, and the two other images that were inspired by her, click here Pepper08
You will also see her other amazing works.

The Son of the African Sun belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Freedom In Words & Art, Inspired By Life, Lifeline, The beauty of poetry, THE SISTERHOOD, The Word Tree, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom! and Writing: Persuing Happiness

A story has come to be unraveled
it has only just begun
it is the story of a warrior
the son of the African Sun
 The cries of the voices of two passionate lovers
throughout the Universe were heard
the passion of the African Sun and a beautiful woman of the land
made beautiful their expressions of eternal love

So he was conceived  out of true love

The thunder started drumming a rhythmic beat
under the African moon
drowning the cries of the woman
 who was about to give birth soon
The gods were wrapped in envy
for she gave birth to a beautiful child
meant to be a warrior
to be strong, free and wild
They united to conjure up a master plan
to snatch the son from his mother’s arms
beguiling them to think that he was too sick, too frail
not good enough to be a warrior
to be the son of the African Sun
But the mother would rather not listen to these tales
she would rather give up her life then give her child away
and thus he grew up healthy, nourished by her life giving breasts
and the African Sun, his father, made him stronger with his life giving rays
He grew up to be a warrior
like the proud Zulu warriors of his land
the adversities in life he was able to battle
with a single blow of his warrior hand
His heart was like that of a lion
starving for life and ready for the kill
and his senses were sharp and swift as the cheetah’s
to chase his dreams as if they were his last meal
He started to travel to educate himself
for wisdom and knowledge was important he knew
He studied the arts, the cultures, the stars and especially the moon
She became his substance, for when she came out at night
his strength was renewed

She became his mistress for his love for her grew.

But as everything in life has an end and has to die
he, though a son of the African Sun wasn’t immune
Just as he was given life and breath
one day he would experience death.
And die he did
The gods had gotten even, they made sure he was cursed
for his soul divided into two
one took the form of a raven (witnesses and announces death)
the other of a phoenix (doomed to die and resurrect)
and off to the sky they flew

Time has long gone and passed away
but if you listen carefully
you will hear the soft fluttering wings of the warrior’s souls
still searching for each other
for all eternity
to be whole again
One
The Son of the African Sun

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    i believe that the person you wrote this for will be both deeply moved and honored…..i think you captured a wonderful part of their essence…..

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you very much for reading and commenting erich. It is very much appreciated your beautiful comment. I hope he will think so too. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    erich, if you wish to go back to the poem, you’ll find a nice surprise. Someone was inspired to do a piece on it. She did three versions to it, but I had to pick one. So if you go back, you could see and click to see the other ones. Iris It will do me and her an honor. Thank you once again.

  • ricardo perez jr

    ricardo perez jr

    God ! dat I love dis one fo real soo much !

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Rick. I am very glad you liked. Coming from you is a special honor. I mean it. And thank you for the feature. I means a lot to me. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Rick, pepper08 was inspired to do a piece for this poem. As a matter of fact, she did three versions. I know very well that you will be impressed by her work. All you have to do is click on the right at pepper08. She is marvelous. Iris

  • butchart

    butchart

    very interesting story.. beautifully told….. i could feel the sun..AND the moon….........b

  • happyfeet5 replied

    thank you very much. He hasn’t replied to see if he likes it.

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I don’t know if it is too bold to ask, but a very special, talented artist was inspired to do a piece for the poem. Actually she did three versions. They are magnificent. If you go to the right where it says pepper08 and click on it, you will see the three versions and in larger proportions. I’ll appreciate it for she is marvelous. Once again, thank you.

  • valzart

    valzart

    Super writing sweetheART great work ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you very much. You are always there to give support valzart and that I appreciate very much. love and huggggs Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I’m sorry if I’m asking for you to go back to the poem, but pepper08 was inspired to do a piece for the poem. Thing is that she actually three pieces which I had to choose. The three were magnificent. If you go back just click on pepper08 that is at the right of the poem. You’ll be amazed of what she did.

  • pepper08

    pepper08

    One of your best my friend…I already have something in mind for this…Do you think the person its about would be ok with it?...I hope so because I think I could do it justice….your friend pepper

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I would love it. Now, I am going to bubblemail him because he hasn’t answered yet about how he feels with this poem and if he liked it or not. Probably hasn’t read it yet. He does have a beautiful soul. And I am so glad you have something in mind for this one. Thanks again. Waiting for his answer. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    It’s 11:30 p.m and I finanally figured out how to put your picture in. I’m writing everyone back to see if they go back and see your three versions of it. And thanks once again. This was fun and full of anticipation.

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    You are an amazing story teller. I loved every line of beauty and strength. The last verse is a breathtaking ending. It has all completely captured my heart. xoxoxo

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I am so happy that you liked it. Thanks for your lovely comment. He has come out of the closet though. And if you see who he is, then you’ll agree with me Shar. Love Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Shar, I would absolutely love for you to go back to the poem and click on the right to pepper08’s inspiration of the poem. She did not only do one piece, but three and I had to choose. It was a difficult one for the three were magnificent. She is very talented. So it would honor me that you go and see her work. Thanks once again for your darling soul. Iris

  • Coronus

    Coronus

    Iris this is like medicine to my soul! Wow!
    I am not too articualte right now – I do believe this has reduced me to a puddle of grateful tears!

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Well thank you Jono for liking it. And my intention was not to make you into a a puddle of tears, but to make you into a legend. Love you. Now, I’ll feel free to put you up there with my comment for this was my surprise to you. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    jono, have you seen what pepper has done with the poem? I think you will be shocked. She did not one piece, but three pieces of the poem and everyone a masterpiece. The bad part was that I had to choose. I finally chose the one with your face at the left and the warrior at the right for your face blends in with the pheonix, the raven is flying high, the lion and the cheetah are there and of course, the moon. You are a creature of the night. The last one I also loved because your face is in the background and to the front the painted warrior is looking at you, ready for battle. The first one, the lone warrior with all of the animals and the moon and his spear is very strong and powerful. This writing was heartfelt, but I didn’t know what the outcome of this would be. It was fun, full of decisions and full of anticipation. Iris

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    Enchanting ! x

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you for commenting, stopping by and liking the poem. And thank you for putting me on your watch list. I also put you on mine. Iris

  • Coronus

    Coronus

    P.S he loves it! LOVES IT. In huge capitals!

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Glad you did. You are always in my heart and had to show it somehow. Iris

  • kimangeline

    kimangeline

    oh wow…this has given me chills…..incredible!!!!

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you for liking this. I really appreciate your stopping by and your wonderful comment. Iris

  • jillijude1

    jillijude1

    Iris you are an angel, HUGS xxx its beautiful

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you, for such a beautiful comment. And thanks for stopping by and reading. I truly appreciate it. Iris

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    This is just incredible work my friend..your words are magical…great writing.

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Trenchtownrock. Coming from you this comment makes me feel honored and has made my day, for you are a great writer yourself. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Trenchtownrock, I know you are a heart and because I ask you a favor, could you go back to the poem? A talented artist, pepper08 was inspired by the poem and asked if she could do a collaboration. If you go to the right where I make my comment, you will see pepper08 there and if you click, you’ll get your surprise. Not only did she did a piece, she did three and they were all magnificent, masterpieces. Bad thing was that I had to choose. It was a tough choice.I know you will love to see them at their larger view. I would like to know then your opinion. Iris

  • Thomas Simunsen

    Thomas Simunsen

    A wonderful fable for a special person beautiful Iris xxoo

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Thomas, for liking it. And thanks for your wonderful comment. And yes, he is a special person. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Once again, thanks for liking this. But I’m writing back. I would love for you to see the wonderful piece that pepper08 was inspired to do. Thing is that she not only did one piece, she did three and they were all magnificent. Bad thing was that I had to choose and it was difficult. But if you go back to the poem, you will see to the right her link or go straight to pepper08. I ask because she is very talented and I think you will like it. Iris

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    thank you for writing this for our special friend …..awesome !!!! xoxo

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thanks for your reading and for liking this poem that was made especially for him. Thank you for your lovely comment. Iris

  • wingsoffire

    wingsoffire

    You are a beautiful heart Iris and Chris is right magical your words definitely are.

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Charlene. Thank you for your beautiful comment. I really appreciate it. And thank you for liking the poem. Hugggsss, Iris

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    loved every word of it
    was delicious and breathtaking

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Finally I was able to get to comment. Once again thank you for your feature. I am honored and very grateful.
    Now, I don’t know if you are familiar with pepper08’s pieces of works, (she is Rhenastarrs sister), but she is magnificent. Now, she was inspired to do a piece with the poem and not only did she do a piece, she actually did three. And they are all stunning. I think you will really like them for she got Africa’s and the poem’s soul out there. I know you will like them if you take a look. Remember, she is pepper08 or I put her link at the right side of the poem in my comment section. Thank you once again for reading and for the feature. Iris

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Touchingly beautiful writing my friend. How beautiful you wove your words to tell the beauty of his soul. An amazing read. He could not help but be proud to be associated with this.
    Wonderfully done. Your work just keeps geting better and better. Congrats on a more than well deserved feature.

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Marie, for your lovely words. They inspire me to keep writing. My muse is a little slower than yours, but as the turtle who is on the race finally gets there, so does mine. Wish I were able to come out very quickly with my writing as you do. But, there is no hurry for me. Every one is different. Once again, thank you. and yes, he deserves it. Iris

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! What an amazing writing….love Jonathan…he has the heart of an Angel…!!!!!!

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Sally for your wonderful comment. It means a lot to me. And yes, Jonathan has the heart of an Angel. Love Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Sally, I know you are familiar with Rhenastarr, but I don’t know if you are with her sister’s work, pepper08. She does masterpieces with photo and art. Well she was inspired with the poem and it would honor me and Pepper for you to look at what she created. She did not only do one piece, she did three. I had the difficult job to choose which one to put beside the poem. But the three are powerful and depicts the essence of what jono is. I put her link next to the poem or you could visit her at pepper08. Thank you once again, for I know you are very busy. Love Iris

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Iris this is priceless. A tribute to a warrior and a warioress (is that a word) indeed. Brilliant. Xoxo

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Cass. And your words are priceless to me also. And a special wink to you also, if you know what I mean. Love you also, Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Cass, I don’t know if you are familiar with Rhenastar’s sister, pepper08’s work, but she does masterpieces. Well she was inspired by the poem and did a piece, well actually three pieces for the poem and I had the difficult choice to choose which one would go with the poem. But they are magnificent and I think it would honor her if you saw them. Iris

  • bluewhite

    bluewhite

    Ditto to Cassidy’s remark as I cannot improve on it. Aye !

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you very much bluewhite for your wonderful comment. Thank you for stopping by and reading. It is very much appreciated. Iris

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I’m writing back because pepper08 was inspired to do not one but three pieces for this poem and they were all magnificent!!!! Trouble was that I had to choose and it was a difficult choice. But if you want you could go to her website pepper08 or back to my poem and to the right you will see her link there which you could click to. Would do her an honor for you to do so. Iris

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    Brilliant work Iris…the son of the african sun, such a musical ring to it …wonderful tribute and you are such a talented writer as well;)

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Shanina. I am glad you liked it. You should go back to see pepper’s work for this poem. She made three versions, but I had to pick one. But if you see them all, you’ll be amazed. Iris

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    iris i’m going to comment again…..the process that started with jonathan expressing himself to your inspirational tribute and on to pepper’s metamorphosis of the poem/process into image—-the whole thing speaks to the positive power of feeling such a chain can create….i applaud all of you…

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you very much. I am glad you were able to see the inspiration pepper had also. She is very talented and also has a beautiful soul. I guess that’s why everyone here on RB get’s hooked to it. It is like breathing fresh air. Iris

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Oh, yes, I am very familiar with Pepper08…she is a member of THE SISTERHOOD…her work
    is incredible…This is an awesome collaboration so perfectly matched…I love the other two
    pieces … each beautiful for our beautiful Jonathan!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxox

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I’m glad you already know her and have seen her work. And I agree with you the three pieces are great, awesome and to think that I had to choose. lol Thanks for going coming back to reply and letting me know what you thought. She is really incredible. And I think everyone loves our beautiful Jonathan. love Iris

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    I did Iris and I love the one you picked…wonderful vision to go with your beautiful poem;)

  • happyfeet5 replied

    I’m glad you did, Shanina. It was a hard choice though, for the three were magnificent. I picked this one for it showed his face part pheonix and the moon was there. He has mentioned many times before that he is a creature of the night and that the moon is his mistress. Thanks Shanina

  • Isa Rodriguez

    Isa Rodriguez

    okay. ir is. I am so speechless. whatever I write here. I am turning to mush .. no puedo.. this is one of your best.. it has moved me to pieces.. i am drawn in .. I am there.. just so beautiful from a beautiful soul and heart..

    I have had a blast looking at your poem.. and reading it three times.. and I am reading Jonathans poems .. and his art. and pepers art.. and I am just floored.. this is what it is all about .. completeness, friendship .. man .. okay I will shut up .. just know I am so proud of you

    your cousin , Isa..

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you, Isa. I just started to get this idea in my head and then words and that’s how it starts. I have to get them out. So I asked him permision to use his poems and his life history which he added in a journal and he is a son of Africa. Then Pepper read it and asked if she could do something with this and he gave his permision and she did not one, but three variations of it. I was shocked. And yes, it shows the compionship there is here and the willingness to help. And I’m proud of you too. I haven’t forgotten. Just need to catch up with my reading, for with the poem and posting the picture, it took practically all day. Any way. love you cousin, very very much. mwah

  • Danceintherain

    Danceintherain

    Everything about this is beautiful … the words … the way it was given … the way it was recieved … the way it has inspired the creativity in another … the gateway it has become for someones mother. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful …
    • Coy *
  • happyfeet5 replied

    Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you for your loving,beautiful and thoughtful words. I’m glad you were able to see that in here. Friends here are so marvelous. They give and give and offer and help out others. I especially loved the way it turned out, that his mother appreciated poems now. He wrote a journal about it. He wrote that she didn’t care for them, and when he showed her his, she would read them and then discard them But with this one she read and reread and then asked ,”she knows you are not Zulu, right? I guess she started to appreciate the metaphors and how they applied to her son. Once again thank you for stopping by and commenting. I really appreciate it. Iris

  • Danceintherain

    Danceintherain

    I read his journal before I read your poem :)
    • Coy *
  • happyfeet5 replied

    So I guess you really got most of the meaning of the words, as to why I say the gods wanted to take him away, because he was too sick, too frail and the adversities he’s had to endure and he was born in Africa. Thank you for replying. Iris

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Truly amazing writing. such terrific details and descriptions. It held me captivated to the very end. I love the title and how you incorporate it through the piece. Awesome xoxo

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you Chirstie for your lovely comment. I’m so happy you liked it. I’m trying to catch up with my reading and I have seen some of your work which is amazing. There is a special one I started to read, but wanted to really savor it. I’ll be there soon. Thanks once again, Iris

  • Coronus

    Coronus


    I am featuring this whilst being entirely objective and impartial. If it was not about me – I would most certainly still feature it. This poem is stunning.

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you very much Jonathan for the feature and of course for your lovely words. I am very happy for this. Iris

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    Wonderful Iris – what a lovely tribute to a very special man XXX
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured in Inspired by Life
    Becca

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Thank you very much Becca and thanks also to Jonathan. I am very grateful and honored to be featured by two very talented writers. Loves and hugs, Iris

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    AMAZING !!!! wow
    another stunning tribute … and pepper did a great job with the artwork to go along with it as well
    but i know jono found it to be medicine to the soul
    an accurate depiction!!
    thanks for sharing this with us dear !!!!

  • happyfeet5 replied

    Your welcome. And thanks, for coming this from you, it is a real compliment. I tried to get the essence of him here. Now, what Pepper did was amazing. And not only did she do one image, she came out with three and then I had to choose. Boy, was that tough. But he really liked them. And Rhrenestarr took the image she fell in love with and made a poem that had me awestruck. But as always, she does wonders with her words. Oh, he put out a journal about this poem, which I mention because it is funny. His mother didn’t care at all for poetry, not even his. And she reads a lot, but not poetry. So he showed this one to her, and if you want to find out what happened when she read it and the question she asked, please read it. It will put a smile on your face.  Oh, how I love you all.  Iris

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    wow this is amazing!

  • happyfeet5 replied

    thank you once again. He is really a great warrior. Iris

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    I am sure he is.He pointed me to yourpoem and I read the one he wrote for you…just stunning

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