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Universal Treatment

Ethereal entrancement captures a certain state of mind
As the Being is lost, and we gaze astronomically into the future
Crystallising all the matter that stands in our collective path
For personal gain, and back stabbing investment.

Frozen moons sing across the vast depths of space and time
Causing even the most fearless Man to cower in a personal cave
Away from the piercing radiation of the red-mist sunlight
Showering through the stained glass of Institutional Belief
Invading the blood-shot eyes of apparent Saints,
Who bathe in the faith of the hopeful masses.

Uttering defiance into the wind,
The Universe takes another swipe at humanity’s feeble clutches
Pulling reality towards the fabrics of a Black Hole,
Whilst tearing through the foundations of its Consciousness.
Our souls will be vacuumed to the vacancies of time,
Making a house that wasn’t a home
Decrepit.

Deceit flows with the breeze,
As rumours of distrust are thrown around
Like a carnivorous game of Chinese Whispers.
The soft voices you hear claim the children are happy
And you walk to the train station,
Treading in the shoes which are stained with their tears

The walls of the factory tells no lies
A forsaken revolution screams at the top of its lungs.
The kiss of a bullet enforced the obedience
and benefited, once again, the White Shirts of Consumerism.
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  • Donna19
    Donna1911 months ago

    You don’t have to. It speaks for itself in the world we live in friend. Accurate and sadly our reality here in the US. Well done.

  • CanyonWind
  • Britta Cait
    Britta Cait11 months ago

    Donna19 is right, it does speak for itself. Love this and the music you paired with it adds just the right tone to the whole thing.

  • Jan Siemucha
    Jan Siemucha11 months ago

    Congrats on the feature ! Beautiful.

  • Ravinder Surah
    Ravinder Surah11 months ago

    Very powerful work, You have been very descriptive here and merged words beautifully.

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobos10 months ago

    Your poetic is claiming for “awakaning” of dumbness and a clear way to revolution. Always has been like that. The scenario is clear, and metaphorically fantastic. Jumping from one to another with luscious look, until I get to the “meaning”..the self-satisfied way of living out of desire, expanding it and turning it inot a mere regurgitation of absurdities. Do you think that the parents aim or duty is to make their “children” happy?. I guess they beleive it now. I say it is not. Fot happines is an state of Soul, and where lack of will and understanding is creeping no happiness is going to grow. I love your poem. One of the best I have lately read. Difficult, yes….as many of your writing but very reachable to my conscience.
    Rosa

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobos10 months ago

  • vampvamp
    vampvamp10 months ago

  • MisssStephaniee
    MisssStephaniee9 months ago

    Beautiful and powerful writing, the music you have selected fits perfectly x