She keeps her head above the water,
wades in on tippy toes
clenching the sand firmly between them.
She clings to algae and mangroves,
Wraps her legs around a buoy
’why won’t you let go darling,
It’s safe over here.
Let go of that branch,
no need for fear’
She squeezes her eyes shut,
shakes her tresses.
She won’t,
she can’t.
Not again,
not here.
He picks her up,
swirls her around,
lays his lies in her hands
lets them mingle in the sands.
You know you’re close
It’ll be so much grander,
if you brush away those woes’_
He rattles her lose,
shakes her,
breaks her
O.K.
she thinks
O.K. Here I go.
I love you,
you knew
I love you,
I really do
Aah
There you go hun,
that was great for me,
made me come,
real hard,
made the fuck so hot,
Don’t you see?
He wipes his face
from his feast,
just another beast.
He lets her fall,
sees her drown
and doesn’t even turn back
to watch the last bubble burst
Comments
Ache…
me too sometimes, me too x
– careless rapture
and unfortunately too many names x
– careless rapture
yes .. ache ..
lays his lies in her hands
mmmm .. she should break them and twist them and then eat them.
she would eat them if they didn’t make her so sick…
– careless rapture
oh…god this made my heart hurt.
mine too darling x
– careless rapture
excellent…but i hate it.
thank you…me too :(
– careless rapture
I hope the feeling passes soon ……..
x
– careless rapture
painfully good.
very fragile right now, for i’m a non swimmer! oh nooooooooooo ;-) xox LOL
f…er.these people are so real to me I’m cringing.which is just what I like in anything under the umbrella of art,..to be affected.
i love the raw emotion. You’re an incredible writer. keep your chin up sweeite.