Seek
The best poem I have ever written, and I thought of it in 5 minutes!
I love Shakespeare and I think his writing influenced this
Seek is about the fact that I have always thought of myself as the best person in the world, and then I met my soul sista, Hannah Hodges, when I was 11.
I haven’t thought that much of myself anymore!
Seek belongs to the following groups:
"Exceptional Ekphrasis", All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Melbourne & Victoria and The Word TreeSeek not wisdom,
Thou should use thy brain,
Seek not courage,
For none shall thou gain,
Seek thy truth,
Then thou shalt see,
Seek thy friendship,
And a good friend thou shalt be.
bjboo
WOW girl, that is soooooooo true. A little Confuzzling but you read it to the end and ‘thou shalt understand’ lol. well done =0D
saleire
Yep…....that says it all. When we look inside sometimes, we learn the most. You have obviously learned about true friendship. Again…..such wisdom! Lovely work.
indeterminacy
It reads like a classic poem. I think the best inspirations are the spontaneous ones. They are also especially rare (at least for me, they are).
gynnirox replied
read more of my work then! lol
~ Ademac
This is very good….............well done.
gynnirox
thanks guys, really appreciate the support! at such a young age that I am, I need all the critisim, help and support I can get, so thank you soooo much!
Pagly2
Then Dear Girl you have learned the first lesson in Life….....Look inside yourself first for answers…...you will find most of them there….........after that..Trust Mum…....lol hugs for you…
RMonroe
Wise Words…..
Damian
Cool work, and I enjoyed it a lot after reading your description, LOL!
gynnirox replied
hehehe, thanks damian, any ideas for others?
Chookas
This Piece is my favourite for sure – lil writer!
☼ BRAVO! ☼
amarica
Congratulations on being featured in the “Exceptional Ekphrasis” group!!!
Chookas
Thanks for resubmitting this … silly me! lol
Chookas! X♥X
Andrew Price
Old beyond your years, and that is not a bad thing! Keep writing. :)
Tim Everding
Wow great work and your only 12 ….thats fantastic!!! :) Congrats on the feature well deserved!
Dawn Kwasny
that is amazing and so young! You are an inspiration for many your age…you could teach them all a lesson!! LOL